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My Lack of Animus

 
When they were handing out animus- I was missed, You know that masculine thing in my psyche; I am all girl, you can check off the female list, Took my bro's play truck because I was feisty. You know that masculine thing in my psyche, I don't like any sports and boy things, I resist; Took my bro's play truck because I was feisty, Did not want to be a truck driver- just him pissed. I don't like any sports and boy things I resist, Have courage and I am a warrior mighty; Did not want to be a truck driver- just him pissed, I have spirit and pride and great integrity. Have courage and I am a warrior mighty, Don't want to be president- just want to be kissed; I have spirit and pride and great integrity, Oh listen . . . I am all girl, so I must insist. Don't want to be president- just want to be kissed, I am all girl, you can check off the female list; Oh listen- (I am all girl), so I must insist, When they were handing out animus- I was missed. ________________________ May 19, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/My Lack of Animus Copyright Protected, ID 16-792-118-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Animus-Anima, Part II- Animus sponsor, Tom Quigley 8th Place

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Date: 6/26/2016 5:14:00 PM
I enjoyed your take on the theme, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement in the 'animus' contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win my beautiful smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:53:00 AM
Feisty, courage, warrior...lack of animus...? Great write, BW, and congrats!
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:44:00 AM
I like it, I really, really like it! CayCay
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:06:00 PM
I love pantoums and yours is balanced with feistiness, courage and "girliness" galore!!!:-) Taking your brother's truck for that reason...:-) :-) :-) The best to you in this contest for this is really good! :-)
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Date: 5/19/2016 6:34:00 PM
I love this!
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Date: 5/19/2016 5:47:00 PM
Great Panoum Broken Wings. Not Tom boyish but you just want to be feisty with poor bro. Could see the imagery of you snatching his truck. Best wishes in the contest, RP.
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