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My Kal-El

In turmoils of the sea You are my boat's sail My peace __ My tran-qui-lity BITE SIZE POEM no26 Poetry Contest by Line Gauthier |

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Fj Thomas

Date: 6/23/2022 11:09:00 AM

I am not familiar with Kal-El, but that does not make this any less beautiful. Very calming Paghunda.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/17/2022 12:46:00 AM

My wife is Arab, she calls her maternal uncle Kaalo, paternal side, Amoo. Nice senryu & so good for u

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2022 8:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on your great win. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/26/2021 11:49:00 AM

The emotional and metaphorical beauty of your poem takes my breath away, Paghunda. Your gifted pen is ever inspiring. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ann Peck

Date: 11/19/2021 9:21:00 AM

Your poem says so much. I love it! congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2021 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/18/2021 10:30:00 PM

Soooo Good! Great poem! Congratulations!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/19/2021 12:17:00 PM

Thank you

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2021 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Paghunda ~ Congrats !

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/19/2021 12:16:00 PM

Thank you. Didn't know it will be placed in the contest. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2021 3:25:00 PM

this is SO nice. I just love it!!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/19/2021 12:15:00 PM

Thanks

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:31:00 PM

Love this one! Simple and profound!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/19/2021 12:15:00 PM

Thank you Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2021 4:17:00 PM

VERY cool. Love when they rhyme like this!!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/21/2021 11:23:00 AM

very motivational piece. thank you.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/10/2021 10:33:00 PM

It can only be He, my dearest friend, the tranquility He brings to our souls, and with His peace that he showers upon us He will enable us to face the turmoils in life. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/11/2021 12:10:00 PM

Indeed... You are absolutely right Jennifer

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2021 8:18:00 AM

A very uplifting poem. love it.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/11/2021 12:10:00 PM

Thank Harry