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Juliet - William Clarke Wontner

My Juliet

Thou art to me the fairest crimson rose,
A tender bloom with dawn's first colour gilt;
Yet ev'ry flow'r in mortal clime that grows,
Is here for but a time, and then does wilt.
By all I e'er held dear, I now aver,
That though a rose may wilt, yet still 'tis sweet;
I only hope a place I could secure
In fondest adoration at thy feet.
For fairness found in form and face will fail,
But that within the heart may shine undimmed;
Though nothing for youth's beauty may avail,
A heart with golden deeds may yet be rimmed.
My Juliet, in truth I do declare,
I love thee not for youthful beauty fair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 3:21 PM
So lovely to see your wonderful sonnet featured on soup today. Hope all is well with you I Sarah hugs Jan xx
Merritt Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Shakespeare could have composed this poem. Nicely done !
Rodgers Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Well done. I'm amazed and daunted by Shakespeare's sonnets and those who follow the practice. If alive today, I think he'd have a franchise "Sonnets for us"
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congr4ats on the win, isaiah
Gorelick Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Wow, and wow.! congrats on your wonderful success. BG
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 6:05 PM
hey, there you are again and with one of the top FAVORITE sonnets that Karen chose for her contest and book!!. WAy to GO, such an honor, and congrats to you.
Jerden Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:27 PM
A classic, Isaiah! I don't think this style will ever die. I just find it more elegant than modern poetry. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 3:42 PM
hey, I just found one I never read yet!!! Your own Juliet poem!! the message of this sonnet is PERFECT and it flows beautifully!
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Very great poetic quality..The competition is stacking up..I like the Old English style..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Chircop Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 1:26 PM
I declare this romantic beauty a favorite : )..Lovely to read 'you' again.
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