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Juliet - William Clarke Wontner

Thou art to me the fairest crimson rose,
A tender bloom with dawn's first colour gilt;
Yet ev'ry flow'r in mortal clime that grows,
Is here for but a time, and then does wilt.
By all I e'er held dear, I now aver,
That though a rose may wilt, yet still 'tis sweet;
I only hope a place I could secure
In fondest adoration at thy feet.
For fairness found in form and face will fail,
But that within the heart may shine undimmed;
Though nothing for youth's beauty may avail,
A heart with golden deeds may yet be rimmed.
My Juliet, in truth I do declare,
I love thee not for youthful beauty fair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/16/2016 3:21:00 PM
So lovely to see your wonderful sonnet featured on soup today. Hope all is well with you I Sarah hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2014 7:05:00 AM
Shakespeare could have composed this poem. Nicely done !
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:43:00 AM
Well done. I'm amazed and daunted by Shakespeare's sonnets and those who follow the practice. If alive today, I think he'd have a franchise "Sonnets for us"
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:01:00 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congr4ats on the win, isaiah
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:36:00 PM
Wow, and wow.! congrats on your wonderful success. BG
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:05:00 PM
hey, there you are again and with one of the top FAVORITE sonnets that Karen chose for her contest and book!!. WAy to GO, such an honor, and congrats to you.
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Date: 3/7/2014 5:27:00 PM
A classic, Isaiah! I don't think this style will ever die. I just find it more elegant than modern poetry. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2014 3:42:00 PM
hey, I just found one I never read yet!!! Your own Juliet poem!! the message of this sonnet is PERFECT and it flows beautifully!
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:31:00 PM
Very great poetic quality..The competition is stacking up..I like the Old English style..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:26:00 PM
I declare this romantic beauty a favorite : )..Lovely to read 'you' again.
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