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Transporting you to childhood days… I*’ll carry your heart to mirth-filled place Glowing with exuberant magical rays Vanquishing gloom of boredom mace Leaving contagious radiance on your face. Join me in this blessed jubilant ride Whirling along merry-go-round tide Such is kids’ achievement of sweet pride Undeniable triumph joyous scream can’t hide… Remember your glee-brightened grin, prettily wide? To your special child, I offer purest delight Calming down his bouts with spastic blight… Come sit with him toward blissful bonding flight Soar above wheelchair’s security-might Braced by faith’s power** --- held by God, lovingly tight.
* Carousel personified Personification in Rhyme form **Psalm 68:35 …God … is he that giveth strength and power unto his people. Blessed be God. April 3, 2020 2nd place, "Carousel Picture Prompt" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 4/7/2020.

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Date: 4/8/2020 6:55:00 AM
Lovely write Beata, terrific win. Congrats. Hugs
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Date: 4/7/2020 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Beata , with great imagery, rhyme and content. Handicap children are the ones most indeed of an imagination to do and conquer the world like other children. Thank you for entering my contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/7/2020 2:26:00 PM
aww Beata I have a huge lump in my throat especially reading your final stanza, your special child inspires so much beautiful poetry to flow from your pen, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2020 9:37:00 AM
CONRATS on your well-deserved win, Beata. The next to last line--so touching, and a surprise. Janice
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