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My Inner Child

When I, like an old professor, scoff all to shape; My inner child scratches me within, like an ape. I laugh aloud forgetting all belittling ills; He says, I'm a hyena, and thus my zeal kills. I cry and he says you're a soft sensitive girl; And my emotional eruption gets a curl. I lay peaceful wanting to have 'Kumbkarna' sleep; He laughs at me and says, sleep has nothing to keep. When I, like Buddha, go to the 'Bodhi' he says; Any tree is 'Bodhi' if you're in Buddha's ways. Each work he criticizes yet he's not ill-willed, It's because he's my true and only inner child. My child is critical yet so objective too, He is, to his conscience, always honest and true. It's he, yet, my life, like a judge, evaluates; Owing to him, as the sun, my life operates. Times might change; years become eras; life designs all; The child in me, like the polestar, directs my call. N.B: 1. Kumbkarna is an Indian mythical figure who slept for six months continuously every year and slept again once his appetite went down. 2. Bodhi is the holy fig tree under which Gautam Buddha received enlightenment. 9 September 2021 Your Inner Child Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/15/2021 5:31:00 AM
Loved the para on buddha. Great write. Congrats. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poems.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/15/2021 9:15:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/14/2021 11:15:00 AM
Ah, I happen to think your one beautiful pole star my friend, you will never be anything else. Keep writing your beauties, congrats
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Date: 9/15/2021 9:15:00 AM
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Date: 9/14/2021 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day with your win..............
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Date: 9/15/2021 9:14:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:56:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Date: 9/14/2021 12:04:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2021 12:07:00 PM
Congrats, Christuraj. Very interesting and enjoyable. Blessings.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:42:00 PM
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:28:00 AM
Oh just delightful Chris. Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/13/2021 7:42:00 PM
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Date: 9/13/2021 9:26:00 AM
You are so much great in stacking ideas of your mind beautifully. Very interesting poem. All the very best.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:42:00 PM
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:57:00 PM
You truly can go to any tree or stay just where you are in "Bhuddas ways". Well penned piece.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:43:00 PM
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Date: 9/10/2021 3:08:00 PM
Your poem says so much about you, Dear Friend. I really enjoyed your references to "Kumbhakarna", and "Bodhi" - truly meaningful. Love and BW ~Mala
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Date: 9/10/2021 9:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/9/2021 9:49:00 PM
Wow!! Beautifully written...
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Date: 9/10/2021 9:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/9/2021 5:28:00 PM
Such a intriguing write. I enjoyed this contest. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/10/2021 9:49:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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