My Immortal

Your face over candles and crystals
Your scent I smell, stick on murals
Finger prints of you over metals
Turning hard to soft like petals

I saw you kneeling when you prayed
Behind you was I and stayed
I can hear your soft voice unafraid
Wishing for a cat unbraid

The candles you litted inside the church
Served as my lights when you left
Your shoe prints on the aisle I search
Vanished like air without a cleft

I sat down for a while
Wishing you would come back
Minutes later you came back
Walking like Immortal over the scratched aisle

Middle aisle of the church so old
With you turning anything like gold
Your prayers are like magic so bold
Reviving with warmth everything around so cold

My immortal is in you that calls
My body and soul that falls
Wished you can be mine someday
Dreaming you're all mine all day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Light Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:17 AM
very deep, elegant, fluent and inspiring, i really like how you wrote it and depicted
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February 12, 2023 at 5:28 AM
Thank you MOON LIGHT.
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