My Hunger For Silence

"And you, O my Soul, where you stand, Surrounded, surrounded, in measureless oceans of space, Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing - seeking the spheres, to connect them; Till the bridge, you will need, be formed - till the ductile anchor hold; Till the gossamer thread you fling, catch somewhere, O my sou.l" (Walt Whitman, 1819-1892, A Noiseless, Patient Spider) _____________________________________________
silence is like a beautiful flower a rose blooming within my heart. . . true silence is not about turning off the noise of life like the television . . . radio . . . music or turning off the computer and cell phone but it is more it is the hunger of being just me and having my own secret quiet- silent place for me it all happens with meditation meditation means bliss . . . it is not something that is happening outside me but deep within . . . it is a hunger I must feed often I will call it an "inside" spiritual journey a journey toward silence I cannot take you along with me or share it with you you must make your own journey . . . all connection with the outside world is broken and all bridges back seem gone the whole world disappears it does not exist in my silence place I think of my yoga mat as a magic carpet that takes me where it will the silence is profound . . . yet there seems a wind blowing me up and away no worldly noise penetrates I need courage . . . I must let go of all fear and I float to the center of my mind where I am a bird singing in the distance just singing . . . I am a cloud full of rain ready to burst then, I am the rain falling I am a flower with petals opening in the sun and I drift on a smooth ocean heading for my true north in utter and beautiful silence . . . ____________________________ July 22, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/my hunger for silence Copyright Protected, ID 19-1168-153-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Hunger sponsor, Silent One First Place ________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse, July - December, 2019 sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place
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Barden Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:15 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Constance - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Greg, thanks for the congrats, yes so true John is an amazing judge of poetry and I am honored ~
Na Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Greg, thanks so much for the congrats !
Hamilton Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 10:49 AM
You were right in entering this one Constance knowing how much I liked it, congrats on another win!
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:14 AM
John, thanks so much for the contest and for my placement within I am totally honored !
Mcgee Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Wonderfully penned...one of my favorite lines: I am a cloud full of rain ready to burst, then, I am the rain falling. Congratulations on a top win
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Jeanne, thanks for the wonderful, the compliment and congratulations !
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August 19, 2019 at 3:56 AM
- A beautiful poem, D.H. ... congratulations on your top win :) - Best wishes for a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful !
One Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:41 AM
Screamed? Haha.. that is a first from you.. Opening line did it for me, but the rest of the poem was full of deep poetry and you know I love that..
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Silent, thanks for the inspiring contest and my great win, yes I screamed when I saw that because I wanted it to place 1st so bad !
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August 18, 2019 at 5:40 PM
i love silence as well...when alone i don't even ever turn on the tv...i'd much rather sit outside even in the extreme heat and just listen to nature...good one, congrats on your top win :) hugs
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Sandra, thanks for the great comment and the congrats !
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August 18, 2019 at 4:37 PM
A golden hunger for silence and beauty. Congrats, DH)
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Kurt, thanks for the congrats !
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Wonderful write Constance very clever to write about your hunger for silence in a contest for the silent one. Obviously he agrees with your top win. Congrats on a very imaginative piece!
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:18 AM
John, thanks for the congrats and for the great compliment on my poem!
One Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 2:09 PM
Silence is like a beautiful flower, what a brilliant way to start off the poem... so many great lines in this great poem.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest where I could express the words in my soul, and thank you for my awesome placement I am beyond thrilled, I screamed with joy when I saw my first of firsts placement ~
Blown Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 4:28 PM
first...nice title and write second...my silence as a token
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July 23, 2019 at 4:29 PM
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July 23, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Very beautiful, Dear Heart, and inspiring to those of us who love to spend time in meditation but are neglectful in the rush of life.
La France Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Sun, thanks for the beautiful !
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