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My Hour Glass Figure

It's been raining for more than twenty-four hours But the rain can never dampen my spirits The sun is shining brightly in my soul I do not have special abilities I just think “positive” Anyone can do it Even you So give it a try What d'ya have to lose This resembles an hour glass And that my dear friends is what life is When the sands of time run out, think back Did you make a difference in someone else's life Or was I selfish and thought only of what's good for me Hope I can say I left earth a better place than when I arrived !!!! THINK POSITIVE !!!!

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Date: 10/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
....a fine wry-te.....time be...quite a-maze-zing of images passing...as sands of time changes in each and others...... stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2023 3:21:00 PM
Yes... the sands of time move on relentlessly! Us Canucks don't get any deals! :)
Date: 10/28/2023 4:54:00 AM
a brilliant shape poem with such wisdom. I agree...we can all serve ourselves and one another by asking if we make a difference in someone's life. You most certainly do with your words and your kind heart. Have to fav this one too, sweet Jack. Have a blessed day, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2023 3:46:00 PM
... that "hour glass shape" was a strain LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2023 5:45:00 AM
Your kind words are much appreciated as usual! dear Sara! How's hubby Bill BTW? Well I hope well! That pizza shape was a strain on my brain :( Love from the north xx

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