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My Home

"for when I'm with you, I'm home" At the long day's end, I hasten to that place of peace far from the world's hectic pace, and it's with eagerness I make my way to that place of grace, for it's there that I can be totally at ease. Those days when life has beat me down, I know that I'll find solace in your arms, for love and concern we have for each other. My home is "our home," and it's built on trust, - the firmest of foundations. Aug. 14, 2019 For the Lu Loo's "My Home" Poetry contest

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Date: 8/21/2019 12:09:00 PM
Hi Andrea: Congratulations on avery homey prose!
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Date: 8/20/2019 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored with First Place Andrea! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/20/2019 11:19:00 AM
Andrea truly beatiful! Congrats on first place!;)
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Date: 8/20/2019 10:18:00 AM
wow, trust the firmest foundation. that hooked me to this for sure, amazing-Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. I was honored to read your poem :)-luloo
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Date: 8/19/2019 10:22:00 AM
Makes me think of a little village where all the lights are on in the little houses and everyone is warm and safe. And no one is homeless. :( Sorry, just too many people suffering in this world.
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Date: 8/18/2019 5:06:00 AM
There's no place like home Andrea. This is lovely. xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 7:33:00 PM
such a beautiful poem...you write of love so well...pain always sneaks out in my poem even when i try to write of love.... hugs :)
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:36:00 PM
aww Andrea your love shines through in every line, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:30:00 PM
No place like it Andrea, a place where two hearts beat as one. Yes, trust is indeed the firmest of any loving relationship. Tom
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:14:00 PM
Verses of the heart..love at its best! You are totally at ease with your charming life and it shows..divinity in comfort of home and soulmate..nicely done, Andrea.
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