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My Hidden Days As a Gypsy

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My hidden life as a gypsy started the day I left home,
and hitched-hiked across a continent.The long hours
readily spent in wondrous times of searching for
amazing people from all walks of life and landscapes
that looked like paintings.The unfettered youthful
desire to see and explore the world.

horizon's splayed light
will spread like in coming tide
night covers the day

The enduring pain from the journey was a flame
to  give strength to the fragile will.Lack of food
and nourishment was a constant friend as chilly
mornings lifted tired eyelids to hard ground and
burned out fires.The naked roads were nothing
more than long ribbons that stretched to the skyline
until a car would pass with drivers staring out empty
windows from mundane lives passing judgement
on a lonely traveler in worn clothes and a back pack.
And yet it was my freedom that frightened them most,
for I was doing what they dreamed of and never had
the courage to do.

days turn into night
life is a distance traveled
tomorrow is a thought

2/15/17
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Delaney Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 2:32 PM
This one reveals your vagabond spirit. Congratulations on your win ,,SuZ
La France Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my contest with this great write and I love the image too
Parker Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thank you for my placement dear poet and thank you for my title and another enjoyable contest
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Back to pat your back, congratulations Frederick...
Krampe Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Love the phrase "and yet it was my freedom that frightened them the most ". Your poem really speaks to me, Frederic. Congrats on your placement.
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February 16, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Excellent haibun...I feel your free, adventurous spirit. Did you really do this? If yes, I'm a little jealous.( I've never been that brave.) Good luck in the contest, Frederic...hugs, Rhonda
Parker Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Yes dear poet I did
Onclaud Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 10:18 AM
your words bring out a fascinating sense of abandon and recklessness , frederic... lovely write!..huggs
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Brilliant Frederic, reads like the prelude to a Kerouac novel, carry on my friend...
Green Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:39 PM
This poem really speaks to me, it brings back memories of long ago when freedom was something real and tangible. There were no cell phones or email or any other electronic leashes. If you had a quarter you bought something to eat, you didn't make a call. This was very cool Frederic.
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