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My Heart Stopped Beating With Yours

You touched my heart the first time I laid eyes on you. A crime I thought, I just wasn't ready tied with one breath and steady, a hunger to be happy, promise of a family. Waiting on the front steps of the inn, a pain cry, my love went down. His heart erupted; our life was interrupted. Fell to my knees, whirling storm beside his unmoving form. The sun crests the horizon causing my life to wizen. How long I said not a word only the rustling leaves heard. Love never dies, love endures. My heart stopped beating with yours. 1/13/2018

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Date: 1/19/2018 6:20:00 PM
Yes, you took me there. Your words captured my imagination. Well done!
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Date: 1/18/2018 5:17:00 AM
A well captured loss so unfair. I like the line of falling to your knees. It rings so true when soul love is lost
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Date: 1/14/2018 11:46:00 AM
Heartbreaking poem Eve...
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:26:00 AM
Wonderfully emotive. Well done, Eve.
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Line, for the wonderful inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2018 9:19:00 PM
An awesome poignant write Eve!~Che :)
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you,Cheryl . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2018 8:09:00 PM
A heartfelt write Eve...well penned...
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/14/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph,, . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2018 6:30:00 PM
This is so moving and beautiful Eve! Your last line shines a light on the incredible pain of such loss. : )
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/14/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, prayers for you and your family . Hugs Eve ~`*

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