My Heart Is Fragile

FRAGILE HEARTS

F alse friends force me to feel fretfully furious, 
  R eason turns to regret as I remember the rejection.
    A m I antagonistic to anybody's approach?
      G uilt gives greater grief than gladness;
         I ain't interested in increasing inconveniences...
           L et's learn to love, laugh, live and let live,
             E ventually, everything will end in an enjoyable experience.

                 H appy harmonious hearts happen to be healthy,
             E nergised by encouraging and empathising with everyone;
         A lthough all around me, angry arguments arise,
     R esulting in relationships going wrong, 
  T o the True and Triune God, I totally turn,
S teadily, my sorrowful heart finds solace in this Spiritual solution.

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24.10.16



Look into    m~y   h~e~a~r~t,
A lot of doubts have piled,
Lord, let them depart,
Please, make me feel worthwhile,
This heart too    i~s   f~r~a~g~i~l~e.
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Form: Quintain
10.11.16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Jo, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, I just L.O.V.E. it, not just for the words and emotion but the creative layout too. I could feel your fragile heart, well done ~
Daniel Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Thank you, Constance for the second chance:) all glory be to God Almighty:)
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations
White Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:44 AM
This is beautiful, acrostic and alliteration. Great work!
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:16 PM
I like how you focused on the individual lines' alliteration with its key letter's sound. Great crafting of an acrostic!
Flannery Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:55 AM
What a great talent, not only the skill and patient determination in doing so, but the exceptional ability to convey your theme in such a touching but stern emotion. Great write Jo Daniel that so many can understand, relate to and possibly learn from. God Bless! Sounds like a winner to me!
Green Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Simply amazing Jo, if amazing can be simple. I know this couldn't have ben easy but you sure make it look that way. A beautiful message in a wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:46 AM
A masterful Acrostic full of meaningful messages and spiritual light! Excellently done dear Jo! Good luck my friend!
George   Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Sensational acrostic, Jo. Lainey
Turner Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:17 AM
This is a great acrostic, Jo I always love reading alliteration. This is very well done:)
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