My Heart

My heart has many feelings They come in all different Shapes, sizes, colors and uses And it h a t e s when you're abusive I'd show how much I love you But then you would not listen I had the chance to have you as my own But now that chance is blown You have someone to love, care, be there for and share But you've left me with something better You said I'm like your one and only sister Thank you for not giving my heart back in pieces Cause now you're apart of it And I love you. .

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Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 5/18/2009 8:59:00 PM

this poem was awesome it really reached my soul! luved it! :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/5/2009 9:41:00 AM

Thanks for the happy ending! Nifty rhyming and honest emotion... well done you! Best wishes, Keith

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/27/2008 5:10:00 PM

havent heard from you, you know they have a chat room now, you all can get it goin.

John Rhinem

Date: 12/24/2008 9:46:00 AM

"MERRY CHRISTMAS PRECIOUS YOUNG ALEXANDRIA *^-^* AND MAY IT BE FILLED WITH BEAUTY & HAPPINESS & JOY FOR YOU YOUNG LADY~TO LAST YOUR LIFETIME THROUGH~AND~MAY HEAVENS GRACE & BLESSINGS FOREVER POUR UPON YOU~WITH BEAUTIES THAT ARE BOUNDLESS & LOVE THAT SHALL NEVER END~ALWAYS TO YOU~JOHN!"~"MERRY CHRISTMAS!"

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/20/2008 5:40:00 PM

what's that website called that u wanted me to get an account with?

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/20/2008 3:19:00 PM

You can be a bit too energetic, cool down a bit lol. Don't get in people's face too much, if you know what I mean. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. :) ~Michaela~

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/20/2008 3:05:00 PM

Alexz people make silly mistakes on impulse, it doesn't make you a bad person. you are who you are, and I think I should be the one saying I don't want to be friends, not you. Don't let your low self esteem run your life. :) Thanks, I'm glad you liked my poem. ~Michaela~

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/20/2008 9:14:00 AM

WHy should I stop being your friend?

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/19/2008 8:15:00 PM

It's ok, can you delete that one post then? There are so many people who care about me on this site that they are annoying me about that question. I would appreciate it :) ~Michaela~

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/18/2008 5:15:00 PM

i told you to be sweet. john

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/18/2008 1:33:00 PM

How am I confusing you? I don't get it. And I'm not answering that question. ~Michaela~

Ian Petch

Date: 12/17/2008 7:00:00 PM

yeah sure, my a link to my profile - http://www.elftown.com/member.html?membernr=101068 just send a message n we can chat on there.

Ian Petch

Date: 12/17/2008 1:06:00 PM

gud thing u dont have the balls... otherwise he might run into a little surprise a bit later on that cud get him to change his mind about the whole thing :P

Ian Petch

Date: 12/17/2008 12:57:00 PM

hehehe, how random :P and u do work fast dont u ;) u like him then?

Samantha Watts

Date: 12/17/2008 5:20:00 AM

its alexz matheny!

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/16/2008 8:22:00 PM

This was beautiful Alexz great write. Blessings! ~Michaela~

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/16/2008 6:41:00 PM

Looks like we have alot in common... your sissy/friend *Breana

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/16/2008 6:29:00 PM

ok tnx for the comment and tnx 4 prayin 4 her...

Ian Petch

Date: 12/16/2008 6:20:00 PM

okies, the south lebanon ohio profile then? ...mood says annoyed? :P hehehe

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/16/2008 5:04:00 PM

U r 2 sweet, tnx 4 the comment and i now consider u to a sister...tnx 4 listening... oh yeah i get my phone friday so i will be txting u. k?

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/16/2008 4:51:00 PM

You did a good job on this...i like can't wait till i find someone to love or to talk to... *Breana

Ian Petch

Date: 12/16/2008 4:17:00 PM

hey there, been reading through your poetry, gud stuff. while I am rather up myself and know just how gud I am, u tend to experiment a lot more than I do :P get more practice with ur different styles and u cud become the overlorded master of all poetry in the universe!! O.O .....like me! :) lol thanks for enjoying my stuff anyways, and thanks for faving me :P gud luck with the overlord thing ;)