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I have a small secret confession to make, And I’ll tell you about it right now. It’s a fetish I have with the skin on my face, Above and below my eyebrow. I love to tattoo small spots and freckles, Just like the young kids who have lots. The more that I have the better person I am, Better person because I have dots. The dust of cute is the sun kissed look, It’s the imperfect that makes them so pure. Stunning, I love them, the bronze, gold and mauves, Each one, to me, has an allure. I landscape my face adding shades just for depth, Using pigment instead of permanent ink. I love every freckle put onto my face, And I share them when I smile, laugh or blink. 22 august 2016, interesting contest

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:37:00 PM
Lewis! love this one! my fave in the contest!congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/27/2016 1:46:00 PM
Congrats Well-done great interesting poem x
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Date: 9/27/2016 1:08:00 PM
Freckles ARE interesting things, I agree! My sister had quite a few, fading in time. Great poem and congrats on your win, Lewis :)
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Date: 9/27/2016 1:06:00 PM
I remember those "freckle days". they came out just about the same time as the summer dandelions.....Got a chuckle out of this well written bit of humor. thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:40:00 PM
Well stated. Noted picture more so this time.They are a magic power we have to face. Knowing freckles truly belong an ace. Peace, Love and Joy.
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