My Hair Tries To Define Me

My hair tries to define me
I laugh in her straggly non- curls
Hoping to shame me, she taunts me
About being messy and unkempt

Together we could be a social disgrace
except only she cares, wanting a brushing,
regular combs run through her, etcetera.
She is much more prissy than I am.

Unbothered by her begging and pleading,
I march on kicking the possibility of a well coiffured head
out of my way,
watching her hopes and dreams land in mire and muck.

She glares at me from a mud puddle
with ticks and lice hopping onto her.
I truly do not care.

Her cowlick promenades around
the bugs’ barn dance.
This does not concern me.
I will never define myself by my hair.
My hair tries to define me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 5:51 PM
This is positively hair-raising! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:54 PM
I have to tell you, some women are defined by their hair, and possibly some men. I know it sounds unreal...
Hamill Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Hair does have a mind of its own.mine went and left me in my 20s.lol..take care.simon.:)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:08 PM
Mine is thick as a bristle brush, like my Daddy's.
Downing  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Good one, Caren, but lice creeps me out... Lol!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:09 PM
You could never work in a grade school.
Dome Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:19 AM
We all have bad hair days. Some have very bad hair days and are bald. We should be thankful we have hair. Why am I itching all of a sudden? Haha. well done.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:09 PM
As soon as I read Akkina's post, I began scratching my head incessantly.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:13 AM
Sister, you shock the system with ticks and lice...lol! Nicely done!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:10 PM
Hahahaha I am such a non-prissy mommy and grandma.
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