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My Hair Tries To Define Me

My hair tries to define me I laugh in her straggly non- curls Hoping to shame me, she taunts me About being messy and unkempt Together we could be a social disgrace except only she cares, wanting a brushing, regular combs run through her, etcetera. She is much more prissy than I am. Unbothered by her begging and pleading, I march on kicking the possibility of a well coiffured head out of my way, watching her hopes and dreams land in mire and muck. She glares at me from a mud puddle with ticks and lice hopping onto her. I truly do not care. Her cowlick promenades around the bugs’ barn dance. This does not concern me. I will never define myself by my hair. My hair tries to define me

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Date: 12/3/2020 5:51:00 PM
This is positively hair-raising! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/3/2020 10:54:00 PM
I have to tell you, some women are defined by their hair, and possibly some men. I know it sounds unreal...
Date: 12/2/2020 6:02:00 PM
Hair does have a mind of its own.mine went and left me in my 20s.lol..take care.simon.:)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2020 11:08:00 PM
Mine is thick as a bristle brush, like my Daddy's.
Date: 12/2/2020 6:23:00 AM
Good one, Caren, but lice creeps me out... Lol!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2020 11:09:00 PM
You could never work in a grade school.
Date: 12/2/2020 6:19:00 AM
We all have bad hair days. Some have very bad hair days and are bald. We should be thankful we have hair. Why am I itching all of a sudden? Haha. well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2020 11:09:00 PM
As soon as I read Akkina's post, I began scratching my head incessantly.
Date: 12/2/2020 6:13:00 AM
Sister, you shock the system with ticks and lice...lol! Nicely done!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2020 11:10:00 PM
Hahahaha I am such a non-prissy mommy and grandma.

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