My Guardian Angel

Jonah guardian angel 
Great prophet 
of Israel 
In God's path 
You ran away from the Lord 
On a passage 
From a seaport 
Of Joppa 

God commands everything 
On a ship 
heading away 
Everything in his creation 
He blew upon the water 
Sending a storm 

Threatening to break 
the ship asunder 
A terrified crew 
they began casting lots 
Coming to the conclusion 
Jonah was responsible 

For the raging storm 
He asked to be 
Thrown overboard 
A small boat 
from the ship 

They began 
rowing for the shore 
The waves 
they just kept 
getting higher 
Afraid of God 

The sailors 
Cast him overboard 
Into a storm 
raged sea 
The water became calm 
A sacrifice 
they made 

As the crew 
swore vows 
To God the almighty 
Instead of drowning 
Got swallowed 
by a whale 

In the belly 
Jonah cried 
Repenting with tears 
In the Almighty 
Lord's name 
Praising him 
to the highest 

In poetic statements 
salvation came from 
The Lord Almighty 
Inside the giant 
Of a fish 
For three days 

God commanded 
The whale 
to vomit 
The redundant prophet 
On dry land 

This he obeyed 
His master's call 
Walking through Nineveh's 
Proclaiming in forty days 
Destruction of the city 
From the weather 
To the whale 

A supernatural rescue 
On land his hair 
bleached white 
Ghostly his linen 
From the whale's 
stomach acid 
His skin pale 

Surprisingly 
the Nineveh people 
Believed Jonah's message 
Wore sackcloth 
Covering themselves 
In ashes 
Hiding in shame 

Almighty God 
Had compassion 
Sparing them in his mercy 
He did not destroy the city 
One of wickedness 
Israel's enemy 
Spared 

Stopping outside 
the city to rest 
God he provide 
a vine 
Shelter from the warm 
Baking sun 

Again he questioned God 
Jonah was very angry 
With the Almighty 
Questioning 
Why did he spare 
the enemies 
Sworn unto 
Israel 

Next day 
God provided a worm 
That ate into the vine 
Withering and dying 
Grew faint 
in the sun 
Jonah he complained again 

God scolded 
him severely 
No concern 
was shown for the vine 
What about Nineveh 
Population 120,000 
lost souls 
As the story goes 

He spent three days 
In the inside of a whale 
The same length 
Our Lord Jesus 
In the tomb 
You are the salvation 
Of lost souls 

Thinking he knew better 
Than the Lord 
Who shows mercy 
With forgiveness 
To all people 
Who repent 

In a life defying God 
Speaking in openness 
With all honesty 
Wise is to obey 
The one who loves 
Us the most 
praised 
in the Heaven's

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/20/2013 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations liam, , enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:44:00 PM
Congrats - Excellent. Ralph
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Liam! Really great work on this poem!
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:48:00 PM
I do like the stroy of Jonah..I just can't imagine the look of the people when they saw and smelled Jonah who had been insie the whale's belly...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan thou i might add Jonah could not have been an Angel. . . it is as different as coffee and tea
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, liam
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:27:00 AM
Nice poem dear.Congratulation on your win......
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:10:00 PM
Hello liam, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:17:00 PM
I did read this poem, Liam. And, the story you told here is great and very uplifting....However, I don't think that I can give you the comment it deserves...To be honest, I am not religious myself. And I am not against those who are....Religion is just something that I didn't grow up with...However, I have a new poem titled, "Dark Angel".
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 6:28:00 AM
THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH APPRECIATED DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT
Date: 9/5/2013 1:34:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem about faith..touching my soul..awesome
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
i wrote something beautiful today it takes every grain of feelings to build this castle such beautiful words they touched my soul i thank you dearly
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