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My Greatest Performance

This tale of my greatest performance many may think insufficient and small. I learned a lesson: Don't give in to chance; if you want something, give it your all! This tale occurred way back in seventh grade, when everything is either do or die. I led cheers in sixth at another school, and was one of those chosen to now try. The jury was the high school Varsity. The competition: lovely Jannance, who won EVERYTHING so easily we other three stood barely a chance. I would act like a cheerleader should be: peppy, happy, and be sure to yell loud. Jannance went first and softly spoke the cheer She wouldn't be heard above any crowd. Well, I cheered like there were no tomorrows, and, later that day, I learned I had won. A lesson I've kept through smiles and sorrows: We can leap hurdles in life's distance run! May 12, 2022 The Greatest Performance of my Life Poetry Contest by JCB Brul A First Place

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Date: 7/13/2022 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Good for you. Love the ending. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/14/2022 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 7/13/2022 6:25:00 AM
"if you want something, give it your all" - Great truth. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/14/2022 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. You understand about giving it your all!
Date: 5/16/2022 3:48:00 PM
Things matter so much more when we're younger, so glad you didn't give up and took home the win - am cheering for you in the contest :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/16/2022 4:54:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Michelle. Don't they though. The main thing is the valuable lesson I learned. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/12/2022 10:02:00 PM
Yes, we can can leap hurdles if we are really focused ! I can imagine your excitement on your winning especially with another contestant with a greater chance ! Congratulations, Ann ! All the Best in the contest....
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/13/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Valsa. And, as I told Milton, Jannance went on to win everything else. :)
Date: 5/12/2022 3:35:00 PM
So happy you learned this valuable lesson early in life, Ann. Poor Jannance!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 10:06:00 PM
Well, Jannance went on to win everything thing else! :)
Date: 5/12/2022 11:59:00 AM
Wonderful life lesson Ann! Congratulations on your winning moment! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings on your continued efforts to live this precious life lesson. Thank you for encouraging us with your story!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 12:24:00 PM
Oh, Sam ~ you really do say the most uplifting words! Thank you so much.
Date: 5/12/2022 11:22:00 AM
Winning by merit is always the best memory! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/15/2022 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, Rico. It's truly awful. I never thought I would dislike blue skies. Not even a tiny wisp of a cloud. Northern NM is just going to burn to the ground and probably never regrow with continued drought, according to an earth scientist.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/13/2022 11:02:00 AM
I do hope some well-placed rain changes your life, and soon! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 12:26:00 PM
It is! That competition is a silly thing to name as my best performance, but it really did change my perspective on life. Aloha!
Date: 5/12/2022 8:09:00 AM
Cheers to that! A beautiful memory
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/12/2022 9:22:00 AM
Thanks, Seeker! Much appreciated.

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