My Greatest Performance

This tale of my greatest performance
many may think insufficient and small.
I learned a lesson: Don't give in to chance;
if you want something, give it your all!

This tale occurred way back in seventh grade,
when everything is either do or die.
I led cheers in sixth at another school,
and was one of those chosen to now try.

The jury was the high school Varsity.
The competition: lovely Jannance,
who won EVERYTHING so easily
we other three stood barely a chance.

I would act like a cheerleader should be:
peppy, happy, and be sure to yell loud.
Jannance went first and softly spoke the cheer
She wouldn't be heard above any crowd.

Well, I cheered like there were no tomorrows,
and, later that day, I learned I had won.
A lesson I've kept through smiles and sorrows:
We can leap hurdles in life's distance run!

May 12, 2022
The Greatest Performance of my Life Poetry Contest
by JCB Brul
A First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Good for you. Love the ending. Have a great/blessed day.................
Peck Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Alex Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 6:25 AM
"if you want something, give it your all" - Great truth. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. You understand about giving it your all!
Faulkner Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Things matter so much more when we're younger, so glad you didn't give up and took home the win - am cheering for you in the contest :)
Peck Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Oh, thank you, Michelle. Don't they though. The main thing is the valuable lesson I learned. Thanks for commenting.
George Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 10:02 PM
Yes, we can can leap hurdles if we are really focused ! I can imagine your excitement on your winning especially with another contestant with a greater chance ! Congratulations, Ann ! All the Best in the contest....
Peck Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Valsa. And, as I told Milton, Jannance went on to win everything else. :)
Hankins Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 3:35 PM
So happy you learned this valuable lesson early in life, Ann. Poor Jannance!
Peck Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 10:06 PM
Well, Jannance went on to win everything thing else! :)
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Wonderful life lesson Ann! Congratulations on your winning moment! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings on your continued efforts to live this precious life lesson. Thank you for encouraging us with your story!
Peck Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Oh, Sam ~ you really do say the most uplifting words! Thank you so much.
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Winning by merit is always the best memory! Aloha!
Peck Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Thanks, Rico. It's truly awful. I never thought I would dislike blue skies. Not even a tiny wisp of a cloud. Northern NM is just going to burn to the ground and probably never regrow with continued drought, according to an earth scientist.
Leffanta Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 11:02 AM
I do hope some well-placed rain changes your life, and soon! Aloha!
Peck Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 12:26 PM
It is! That competition is a silly thing to name as my best performance, but it really did change my perspective on life. Aloha!
Seeker Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Cheers to that! A beautiful memory
Peck Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Thanks, Seeker! Much appreciated.
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