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My Gold Treasure

A treasure found deep in my soul, capturing my essence and making me whole. Deep medallion auric hue, I NEVER KNEW GOLDEN, UNTIL I MET YOU. The value of your natural wealth, has given me hope and restored my health. Aureate warmth with collected value, gave me a riches during days of blue. A treasure found deep in my soul, reminding me of moments I thought hate stole. Sanctified by God, with love faith grew- Saturated in romance as all lovers do. Baby...I NEVER KNEW GOLDEN, UNTIL I MET YOU... May 12, 2017

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Carole Duet

Date: 5/16/2017 12:50:00 PM

...and a golden poem! Also, thanks for adding a new word to my vocabulary: auric. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Laura.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/16/2017 9:43:00 AM

So beautiful, Luloo, and such a loving tribute to your 'golden treasure.' Congratulations on your first place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/16/2017 9:01:00 AM

SO beautiful--makes me say "Ahhh"--congrats on your win, Luloo! Janice

Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/16/2017 7:08:00 AM

Congrats on your win, luloo.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2017 9:36:00 PM

wow, this is beautiful, Laura. I hope it is a very recent post because I don't see how I can be the first one to comment if it's been up a while. Love the final phrase how you put it. About that poem that never got in your contest, I can't even remember it any more!! I am gonna have to find if it ever got posted!! Glad you like My Star. I really had fun writing it.