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Poetic Form: Dramatic Verse
Inspired: 2024 April 28
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"Be one to understand this, it cannot be by gist alone, for it starts through many doors via the following poems/stories, be what may will be your choice. Start, end, middle, or what draws you, come what may. You may sense writings that may draw you of what I've not submitted--BUT, my writings must be from this month alone, and cannot be written yond month of April." ... by the Poet. 01. God Cometh As The Uninvited Guess REVISED EST-HAWT 02. Surreality: NEW 03. Ghost Stories: COMPLETED 04. Mirror, In The Line Of Fire 05. A Place Not Meant To Be: 12 06. A Place Not Meant To Be: 11 07. That was then, this is now 08. Life 09. Psychological Warfare 10. ''Old and New'': Agree 11. Seize: Andaree 12. A betrayal of innocense 13. Wistful 14. A Century Turns: Soviet Union's Life Expectancy: I (This be found in My Short Story, Nonfiction--leans & brutal/Fiction--light) : II about Lenin--in process 15. Blame 16. A Place Not Meant To Be: 10 17. A Place Not Meant To Be: 09 18. White Lies (This be found in My Short Story, a pre-civility moral story) 19. Lizzie Borden, ''Took an ...'' (This be found in My Short Story) 20. O Blessed Kalapana (Ode's--of late March/it applies) 21. Ode be to The Beast (Ode's--of late March/it applies) On one of the Titles, of my yesterday poems (04/27), I nonchalantly wrote down the words "REVISED EST-HAWT". For the clueless, I'll run this by, first. I left a message with TPS at 3:08 a.m. upon the instant of noting numerous emails regarding a tad of my written poems, but overwhelmingly and in particular about my POTW. I then called Georgia at 3:20 & then again at 3:32 in the blessed TODAY a.m. Georgia is Eastern Standard Time, well, Hawaii is a given, HAWT. The call is valid per AT&T from my iPhone. As is my message to TPS--sits idle--also a given, busy boys. NOW to connect the dots, the Revised poem I wrote yesterday the 27th--revised title inclusive, may have manifested as early as the 26th via my soupmail to Silent One, regarding this phrase (a.m. --absent-mindedness). The title was revised yesterday, the 27th. POTW was realized by me, after 3 a.m. today the 28th. The subject Revised Titled poem all written yesterday the 27th was about Armageddon. My Ghost Story reveals my mention of bits and pieces like a trail hidden in my poems--but I, do not see the relevancy. This April my oldest turned 48 years old, and lives south of LA, Laguna Beach down there. This run of oddity poems, was a birthday gift for my son to run the length of April starting with a ghost story on 04/02 and all the way to yesterdays Armageddon poem. I had indulged him in sci-fi since he was six years old, not so much ghost or horror. These oddities were noted by Woody after winning 7th place in his contest, where he had posted that commentary to me, btw, the revised being about Armageddon, I wrote it as a parody -- a need for humor, methinks. Thick in sarcasm, hints in irony. It's dusk, still clueless...ugh

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Date: 4/29/2024 5:24:00 AM
I enjoyed exploring your 'trail of poems' as well as your thoughts, poetic interactions with your fellow soupers. Nicely penned. Wishing you a splendid day, Sara
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Date: 4/29/2024 10:00:00 AM
A birthday gift for the firstborn and a two hour plus phone call and yes, my son is splendid, and may your day be as well, Sara, thank you my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 4/29/2024 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on your POTW. However I am not understanding your writing. Is this a short story? I have written some narratives in poetic form. I have not posted them yet. One has eleven poems which will be posted very late if I live that long.
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Date: 4/29/2024 2:54:00 AM
I welcome you, Victor. The poems listed above seems to be trails of my visions. It involves soupers, they were part of the trail of visions, unknowingly, and I think soupers are being used to validate the visions--unknowingly, no short story, no narratives, no poems. Just a hidden trail from some of my writings in April, that is realized after souper interaction-validation occurs--realized. Aloha

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