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My Garden's Blooming...

my garden's blooming... beautiful roses greet me, with their fiery lips

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Audrey Haick

Date: 9/7/2011 5:30:00 PM

Very lovely Haiku, Ernesto! Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2011 5:05:00 PM

such lovely imagery for a short and seet verse! line 1 is a sentence [haiku uses phrases] all three lines though on the same topic have no grammatical connection [a haiku is a 2 part verse/ where you show the ... at the end of line 1 would indicate you think it is acting as the second line the juxtaposed image/ it is not all 3 lines refer to the rose] line 3 uses personification [haiku does not use personification