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I have a garden where roses and colorful orchids bloom and blush Petunias, begonias and flaming euphorbia on each other brush Where jasmines perfume the air and chrysanthemums flourish They adorn my courtyard giving my eyes a joyful treat They survive the season, braving summer’s blistering heat. With their beauty and scent they conquer every sensitive heart When watering them, all they do is nod and shake Some dance upon their tiny toes, when from their languor awake With crimson bosom bathed in dew, the roses gently quake Desert roses with their scarlet flowers and fat bellies stay, In tiny pots where they are fated to remain all their life at bay I see their lips parting in pain, complaining in a dumb way At the center, stands a bougainvillea plant in attention It grows wild with its branches spread in all direction Though I try to prune it often to prevent its insurrection Nonchalantly it continues to grow forming a wild bower It carries many a bunch of red and magenta paper light flower Which glide down with every passing breeze in scattered shower Oh flowers, with your loveliness, all tired eyes you brighten With your matchless beauty, our joy, you heighten With your radiant smile, all cares, you lighten Alas! You vanish fast as the setting sun’s slanting ray I will be in pain if you are not there to brighten my day So kindly stay....! Please do not wither away!
March.11. 2022 ~Placed First~ Garden Inspiration’s Poetry Contest Sponsor- BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 4/21/2022 9:53:00 AM
What a vision of pure loveliness Valsa! I love all the different varieties of flowers in your poem. You must have a beautiful garden! Like you, my garden is my joy - a gift from God that reminds me of the lustrous beauty of creation and it is never work when I have time to tend my garden! Congratulations on your win! Blessings for you and your garden - no withering allowed!
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Date: 4/21/2022 6:34:00 AM
BIG congrats on you first place, Valsa. Wonderful write, as always
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Date: 4/20/2022 8:32:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your top contest win, Valsa. You really deserve it with this stunning poem.
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Date: 4/20/2022 7:29:00 PM
Great description of garden, flowers of each kind... Congratulations!
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Date: 4/20/2022 6:08:00 PM
Oh Valsa, I know your pain! I love my flower garden, and when it withers away, I feel I will too! I love your poem! Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your first-place win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest :) <3 ~BJ
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Date: 4/21/2022 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much BJ for giving me a chance to write on my pet topic.... My Garden. I know both of us love flowers and gardening ! I feel great gratitude to you for picking up my poem for a first place win .
Date: 3/13/2022 8:16:00 PM
Truly inspiring, Valsa... I too have a garden, where a lonely dandelion grows. It takes me all summer to extract it -- Don't my ten thumbs know! lol. :) gw
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Date: 3/11/2022 10:34:00 AM
Bougainvillea is a pest weed, but an absolutely gorgeous canopy under sunshine in the wild. Too bad it suffocates everything else (like the Queen Anne)! Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/11/2022 8:32:00 AM
Wonderful and very inspirational writing Valsa added to fav. Great entry for the contest, win big dear friend
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Date: 3/11/2022 8:17:00 AM
Good entry for the contest, Valsa. You have a wonderful garden. I enjoyed visiting your flowers through your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 3/11/2022 8:17:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece penned with lovely color and inspiration Valsa, you picture this with such loveliness and flower power. Have a great day, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:16:00 AM
You must have green fingers. A lovely poem.
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:04:00 AM
A lovely garden indeed! … Desert roses with their scarlet flowers and fat bellies stay, //In tiny pots where they are fated to remain all their life at bay AND Though I try to prune it often to prevent its insurrection// a couple of my favorite lines. Enjoyed the variety, Valsa! I would claim this a winner!
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the colorful hues of your garden Valsa. Eloquent images take the reader there strolling in your garden through your words. Beauty and loveliness--as you say! Win BIG!
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Date: 3/11/2022 1:00:00 AM
O Valsa, U are an environmentalist who enjoys her flowers with me - abs the world - now. If each planted any kind of garden, not only flowers nod & tiptoe for your love, but bees & pollinators. India gave the world sugar & source, all things fkavirful, supreme Basmati rice. Shalom, shalom a FAVE
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Date: 3/11/2022 3:27:00 AM
You are right Anil.... I am an environmentalist ! Love flowers ! From my childhood onwards , I used to keep garden plants. I have a small garden which is my neighbor's envy ! In my times of stress, I derive comfort most from God and next from my flowers . Glad to know you too love flowers ! Thanks for the beautiful comment !

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