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My Friend, My Love

My heart, my soul for you have made me whole. When spending time together I lose all control. I worry not when we are apart, for we shall meet once again when we stroll down love’s main street. For when anguish arrives we shall always defeat. My soul, my heart may our worlds never part. You have struck me deep with cupid’s dart. I shall follow you to heaven and back if needed, as our future together shall never be completed. In this life of struggle, we have always succeeded. My love, my friend may our love never end. When I was shattered, my heart you did mend, when pity was required, a hand you did lend. Now in complete loving bliss I’m saturated all from this compassionate marriage we created. My friend, my love sent from up above, you set me free like a white turtle dove. Your kindness is all I’ve ever dreamed of. For you have been my line to my life- I’m so grateful that I became your wife. My Friend, My Love Poetry Contest January 7, 2019

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Date: 1/27/2019 11:42:00 PM
Congratulations. Congrats likewise to your husband. God bless you.
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Date: 1/26/2019 11:33:00 PM
WOW! Congrats to win top.
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Date: 1/25/2019 9:33:00 PM
Your expressions of love go beyond and above Luloo. This is outstanding and I see why it was chosen First Place. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/9/2019 3:06:00 PM
Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/8/2019 10:52:00 PM
Lovely, Lu Loo. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/8/2019 4:58:00 PM
Great poem, Laura! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 1/8/2019 10:06:00 AM
Such a sweet love poem to your husband, Luloo, congrats on your win. I like the internal rhyming in the first line of each stanza. John
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Date: 1/8/2019 7:08:00 AM
Sweet sentiments in a very smoothly flowing poem of emotion...just beautiful.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2019 8:51:00 AM
thank you so much, I am honored to have heard your kind words :)-luloo
Date: 1/7/2019 7:34:00 PM
Superb write, so full of wisdom and gratitude and humility ... true love requires humility, and I think many people never SEE that. I don't mean subjugation, not at all, but the kind of humility that allows others their mistakes, allows them SELVES their mistakes, and realizes that relationships require constant work and care and humanity. You clearly have that, and it's beautiful, as is this wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing ... I HAD that, and lost it foolishly. Blessings, My Friend! <3
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2019 8:50:00 AM
blessings to you too dear Gregory, Word can never express how grateful and excited I get when I see a comment from you...thank you Happy New Year! :)-luloo
Date: 1/7/2019 9:52:00 AM
Oh, Laura Loo, the sweetness of this almost brought a tear. If only many others could find the same.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/8/2019 8:49:00 AM
many thanks sweet Sunlite for this comment and all the kindness you have ever showed to me. I truly am blessed to know you! :)-luloo

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