Home » Poems » Sotto Poet » My Foolish Heart

Sotto Poet | + Follow Poet |

My Foolish Heart

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.

Her iciness gaze ensnared my foolish heart. I was cast in the role of a comic swing. Her infectious smile entices my depart. She led my nervous hand to the Devil's ring!! I was cast in the role of a comic swing. Allow me to nosh your savage side, she roars. She led my nervous hand to the Devil's ring!! Submit now and brace yourself for a wild floor. Allow me to nosh your savage side, she roars. Her touch was thrilling as I sooth her body. Submit now and brace yourself for a wild floor. As I drew close to her, I grasped the fury. Her touch was thrilling as I sooth her body. Forewarned to her as a moth to a candle. As I drew close to her, I grasped the fury. I was dumb fool playing the devil's gamble! Forewarned to her as a moth to a candle. Devil claims she is a sinner, not a saint. I was dumb fool playing the devil's gamble! Her quest was not one to be taken with faint. Forewarned to her as a moth to a candle. Her infectious smile entices my depart. I was dumb fool playing the devil's gamble! Her iciness gaze ensnared my foolish heart. Written: April 1st, 2022 MY FOOLISH HEART Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS Checked by HMS.COM

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 4/7/2022 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Sotto!! Wow! I'm not sure if you've been told before, but you would make an amazing romance novel author!! Your poem is beautiful and intense! I was engaged throughout the whole thing. I love your line, "I was dumb fool playing the devil's gamble". Excellent job and well-deserved win!! God bless and much love...Meghan!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2022 12:01:00 PM

So creative and filled with images that make this poem special - "allow me to nosh your savage side." Congratulations on your win Lasaad. Well earned! Well deserved.

Terry Miller

Date: 4/5/2022 2:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 11:00:00 PM

Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 4/4/2022 10:23:00 PM

Back to your poem with congratulations, dear friend !

Debra L Brown

Date: 4/4/2022 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sotto, enjoyed reading. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2022 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A beautiful/wonderful write and picture. You make writing look so easy. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/4/2022 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest, My Foolish Heart, Lasaad. I really enjoyed reading your poem.

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2022 7:53:00 AM

Sotto, wonderful poem, really well done, best of luck in the contest ~Constance

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance, I'm so happy you like it. That really means a lot to me.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/2/2022 5:43:00 AM

A fantastic poem creatively presented- i think this is your best ever, Kudos my friend. Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jennifer. I'm glad you like it and appreciate your uplifting comment.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/2/2022 4:49:00 AM

Foolish heart will do things like that. You spun the story well, Lasaad. My very best to you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:14:00 AM

Appreciate your comment my friend Vijay.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/2/2022 2:54:00 AM

A very beautiful writing. "Forewarned to her as a moth to a candle", "I was cast in the role of a comic swing" - Beautiful.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:18:00 AM

Thanks, Alex, Appreciate your comment and kindness

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/2/2022 1:51:00 AM

Splendid pantoum. Not easy to write I know Best for a win.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:20:00 AM

Thanks, Victor. My kindest regards to you.

Valsa George

Date: 4/1/2022 9:02:00 PM

Wonderful Pantoum.... a difficult form of verse, I fear I can never handle ! Don't fall in her trap to be doomed, dear friend ! :) All the best in the contest !

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/2/2022 11:21:00 AM

I'm glad you like it, Valsa, as like you said it wasn't easy to write. Thanks for your comment.