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My Flying Dreams-Hutinashro

My flying dreams have flown away. Another place, another day, when dreaming in my bed at night, into the air I used to lift, and with the stars or clouds I’d drift. So young was I when all seemed bright! No more to starlight do I sail, for I have seen some big dreams fail. I’d thought failed dreams would be my plight as plans in my life went awry. Farewell to dreams in which I fly - Yet. . .for my dreams I need to fight! My flying dreams have flown away. At least that’s what I used to say when I believed those dreams had flown away for good; but now I feel perhaps some dreams can be made real! I must not sit around and moan how even daydreams can’t come true. I’m feeling hope has come anew. An optimism now has grown inside me. Do I dare again to dream I’ll leave the ground and then touch sky and reap all that I’ve sown? I’m dreaming daydreams, hoping so! I want to soar and touch a star and LIVE my dream before I go. . . June 21, 2018 for Conner Lotts' Hutinashro - My First Contest Poetry Contest Tried to do this in Iambic Tetrameter. Hope I succeeded. I really like this form.

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Date: 6/24/2018 1:16:00 AM
I have a distinct feeling Andrea, that you are living your dream. How else could you have created this piece of beauty?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/24/2018 3:58:00 PM
It remains to be seen. But definitely something inspired this in me!! You are very intuitive!
Date: 6/22/2018 4:45:00 PM
you just keep on keeping on, and please don't ever stop..this is a Gem..
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:56:00 AM
Keep on dreaming Andrea! I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:26:00 AM
Andrea.. your write is dreamy in every way! I also think it's a sure fire winner in the coming contest!!
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Date: 6/22/2018 6:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the optimism and hope in your poem..a skillful rendering..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:38:00 AM
Well.written Andrea, you seem to tackle the forms with such ease. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 6/22/2018 1:35:00 AM
There is no way in creation I would attempt doing one of these Andrea! You really excel at forms. Bravo! xxoo
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