My Five Senses

MY FIVE SENSES

In my fifties I disavow the taste
but back in elementary school
the image would drift into daydreams —
pork kidneys with savory gravy
went well with the pucker of dills.

The fleabag oil of dog fur,
the weighted polish on nails,
and the brush of bangs on my forehead —
equally threatening.

Honeysuckle to a virgin’s pulse points,
like the aroma of heaven. Lavender seeds
sewn into a sachet. A long sniff,
the bag pressed to the tip of my nose.

My patrons walk into the library, eyes wandering,
lips gripped tight in thought, but with a proper hello
the curvature of their lips in upswing, eyes meet mine
and for a scintilla of time our hearts touch. Likewise —
the smiling eyes of children virtually untouched by experience.

Background sound unsettling, loud sounds deafening,
chomping, chewing — I run! Yet the good conversation
of friends at the table, at work, on vacation — I hug.

My five senses not always sensible, surely sensitive,
and poetic fodder — even in the negative sense.

7/25/2018
My Five Senses
Sponsor: Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Gentry Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! What a unique and interesting tale on the theme of five senses! Creative and well-written verses that made me feel as if I was experiencing each one. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:33 PM
A well-written take on the contest, Kim. I thoroughly enjoyed your write! Congratulations on your fine Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, dear Sandra!
Rose  Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Your senses have served you well all these years. It makes for good poetry dear lady. Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Thanks so much!
Richards Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Oh Kim, .....this is wonderful ! So rich in image, and metaphorically wonderful "Honeysuckle to a virgin’s pulse points....." for instance... I love that line !! I was with you in daydreams!! Congrats to you !!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Carrie! :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Excellent, Kim--very moving. Congrats! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Krampe Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:30 AM
I enjoyed your take on the contest prompt, Kim - congrats on your placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Agnes!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Beautifully conceived Kim! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving second placement! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Marine Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Oooo...fed my five senses on this poetic feast...fav and read twice! ( had to comeback for "seconds.." : ))
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Thanks so much, Aqua!
Onclaud Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 2:09 PM
ohh, all your senses are alive through this wonderful piece, kim...winning wishes with huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much, dear Nette! :)
Ashley Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Wow! Kim, your poem is superb in spirit and gorgeous imagery - 'Honeysuckle to a virgin's pulse points, like the aroma of heaven.' Simply stunning poetry from start to finish. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs :)
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