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My Five Senses

MY FIVE SENSES In my fifties I disavow the taste but back in elementary school the image would drift into daydreams — pork kidneys with savory gravy went well with the pucker of dills. The fleabag oil of dog fur, the weighted polish on nails, and the brush of bangs on my forehead — equally threatening. Honeysuckle to a virgin’s pulse points, like the aroma of heaven. Lavender seeds sewn into a sachet. A long sniff, the bag pressed to the tip of my nose. My patrons walk into the library, eyes wandering, lips gripped tight in thought, but with a proper hello the curvature of their lips in upswing, eyes meet mine and for a scintilla of time our hearts touch. Likewise — the smiling eyes of children virtually untouched by experience. Background sound unsettling, loud sounds deafening, chomping, chewing — I run! Yet the good conversation of friends at the table, at work, on vacation — I hug. My five senses not always sensible, surely sensitive, and poetic fodder — even in the negative sense. 7/25/2018 My Five Senses Sponsor: Viv Wigley

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/16/2018 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! What a unique and interesting tale on the theme of five senses! Creative and well-written verses that made me feel as if I was experiencing each one. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 8/15/2018 7:33:00 PM
A well-written take on the contest, Kim. I thoroughly enjoyed your write! Congratulations on your fine Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, dear Sandra!
Date: 8/14/2018 6:04:00 PM
Your senses have served you well all these years. It makes for good poetry dear lady. Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 8/14/2018 10:04:00 AM
Oh Kim, .....this is wonderful ! So rich in image, and metaphorically wonderful "Honeysuckle to a virgin’s pulse points....." for instance... I love that line !! I was with you in daydreams!! Congrats to you !!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie! :)
Date: 8/14/2018 9:44:00 AM
Excellent, Kim--very moving. Congrats! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 8/14/2018 7:30:00 AM
I enjoyed your take on the contest prompt, Kim - congrats on your placement.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 8/14/2018 7:08:00 AM
Beautifully conceived Kim! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving second placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 7/28/2018 6:49:00 AM
Oooo...fed my five senses on this poetic feast...fav and read twice! ( had to comeback for "seconds.." : ))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2018 7:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Aqua!
Date: 7/26/2018 2:09:00 PM
ohh, all your senses are alive through this wonderful piece, kim...winning wishes with huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Nette! :)
Date: 7/25/2018 8:26:00 PM
Wow! Kim, your poem is superb in spirit and gorgeous imagery - 'Honeysuckle to a virgin's pulse points, like the aroma of heaven.' Simply stunning poetry from start to finish. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2018 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs :)

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