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My Five Senses

there are perfectly magical days when I’m easily overcome with appreciation for my five senses a multitude of prompts can trigger reactions that tingle to the depths of my being the sound of wind chimes in the summer breeze be it metal bamboo sea shells or glass the sight of sunflower fields as far as the eye can see the sudden aroma of lilac afloat on a puff of air the taste of delightful raindrops upon my parted lips the feel of a soft purring cat desiring nothing more than a caress my soul lives for these gifts AP: 1st place 2020, Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on July 24, 2018 for contest FIVE SENSES sponsored by VIV WIGLEY - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 9/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Well done Miss Line. This is late but I am just starting to figure this website out. You are so talented. I can tell by your words you are VERY intelligent too. Take care , bless you and yours. :)
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Date: 9/16/2018 4:05:00 PM
LOL - I'm going to need a bigger hat!
Date: 8/21/2018 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/21/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Sara. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/16/2018 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2018 4:49:00 PM
Words that warmed my heart Line. I am happy to see this delightful poem rate so high on hs list! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 8/14/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, for your lovely visit and comment. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2018 12:31:00 PM
Just reading this poem tells me that you have true empathy for nature. Beautiful poetry Line. Congrats :)
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Francesco. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2018 11:39:00 AM
This is beautiful, Line and I can engage with all these sentiments.
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Wendy.
Date: 7/25/2018 1:12:00 PM
Such vivid descriptions, much enjoyed this!
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Date: 7/25/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/24/2018 6:32:00 PM
A poem that draws one in for such sweet sensations!
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Date: 7/24/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sunlite, for your lovely visit.

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