Notes About The Poem

My First Painting Lesson

A happenstance of useless attempt,
The folly of entering the wrong classroom.
I am told to sit down and paint.
Paint what?  I never used a brush before.
I dream I am a gull. 
An idea flutters erratically as
My thoughts wafting over turbulent seas.
Perchance I might find some fodder
To enhance my worthless chances.
The sea whispers back to me:
Begin your quest.  
I splash my canvas with irrational colours,
I daub here and there, using all types of blue and white.
A misogamy of random hues.
Clearly a failure of painting 
As the canvas is now dank and worthless.
Slowly it dries and I wonder what it is supposed
To convey.  The teacher looks on humming.
You like the abstract? she asks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Hello Victor. No painting or any character of art is dank or useless. Never. As always you leave us with thought and imagery. This is more than lovely. Have a beautiful afternoon now and always. Love and Blessings now and always as well. Remain safe please. (smile)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 5:04 AM
A wonderful conglomerate of colors! My eyes go in different directions…to red, blue, black, white then yellow lines. “Paint what? I dream I am a gull… A misogamy of random hues…” Blessings, dear Victor!
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 11:44 PM
I would have said the same thing you must like abstract. Enjoyed reading ,was this one was good. Hugs eve
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:26 PM
so cool. I bet the teacher loved it!
Buehler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 10:36 AM
I enjoyed your story, about your interesting art endeavor, Victor. Very nicely written and thought provoking.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:35 AM
What a fun write/painting. Good job on both. Have a wonderful day writing/painting away...................
Poet Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:19 AM
A really original piece, Victor. I adore your poem, which has a unique style. I like the instructor's candidness.
Turner Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:50 AM
This is a fun one, Victor. LOL Amazing what some folks call art. Jackson Pollock art sells for millions if you can find one. Have you ever seen one? Looks like someone was painting a wall and dripped paint everywhere. Have a good day:)
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Is the photo truly your first painting Victor? You know is in the eye of the beholder, right? hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 6:11 AM
A creative write, Victor. You now how to tell a good story.
Volumes Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:18 AM
I didnt take art, but I wish I had, it sounds like fun. Nice poem my friend. Well told.
Rose  Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:02 AM
lol I love abstracts Victor, I can see so many things in them, all signs of an either demented woman or a perceptive one who knows, have a great day dear friend, proud that you picked it up, I have been art splashing for years now. ;)
Kitchin Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 3:21 AM
Victor, I enjoyed your painting experience.
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 3:06 AM
- You did your best ... there is a lot of weird "art" - A great poem, Victor :) - hugs
George Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Love your poem, something quite different. I enjoyed the natural response of the teacher. Though you feel it is a defeated attempt, modern painters find much meaning in it. To be frank, I cannot enjoy abstract paintings !
Mcintosh Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:22 AM
When I was young, I loved drawing and painting - but words are my tools today. I love poetry and prose, the empty page. Your voice shines in your masterpiece here. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Daniel Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Only the teacher could find the beauty in your painting, Victor, and maybe she was right!!
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