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My First Hate - Contest

Am driving along quite happily
Then happened to see
A white van driver
Trying to overtake me

He flashes his lights
Drives close to my tail
Gestures unmeasurably
Merrily on I just sail

He then drives beside me
Not sure what he said
But two fingers were involved
Close to his head.

Why oh why my white van driver
Do you think the roads you own
Hmm what is that you’re doing
Talking on your phone?

This is my first hate
The white van driver and his mates
It’s hard to allow overtaking
when the width of the road dictates.

Penned 12/02/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 9:10:00 PM
Seren, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2014 11:12:00 AM
yes, road rage isn;t fun, seren.. ..sweet congrats on your award!.. huggs!
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Date: 2/24/2014 4:23:00 AM
Awesome poem and congrats on the fine win, seren
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Date: 2/12/2014 5:21:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend! I certainly know about these kind of drivers, they drive me up the wall too! You just have to remain calm and let them go about their way...and make fun of them all the way to your destination (the way they looked when they passed you, seriously, that had to look a little funny, no?) I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem here this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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