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My First Date-Win

Flapping bosom beats Dauntless love sprinkled mind Recipe of passion Grins of pure high spirits Chatted, with hand in hand for time. Looked in her eyes, the doorway Leading up to her heart The place that is a soft sanctuary Like a butterfly our love settling Surprisingly on least expected bliss Then she was nigh, heard her sigh She, as sincere as spring poetry Felt soft red lips upon mine Tasted like drinking salty water Drank, drank and the thirst increased. The touch of delicate skin Each gentle move mesmerized me. This first date was to last for ages Anticipation spilled from her eyes That have enchanted me for years.
+++++++ Date: March 19, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: First Date by Frank H.

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Date: 3/30/2014 4:24:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win... Nice First Date entry..... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Dr. Ram!! ^__^
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Beautiful poem from the heart; free verse applied so fluently.// paul
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful day-dreamer. Congratulations on the first place win... Verlena
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Date: 3/23/2014 4:46:00 AM
Dear Sir, so sweet and heart touching poem to arouse hot passions in the beats. Thanks ! Please advice me by your loving comments.
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Date: 3/22/2014 1:27:00 AM
Dr. Ram, that's appealing... Congrats :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:50:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Great passionate work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:34:00 AM
- Sweet memories ... Dr.Ram - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:24:00 AM
Enchanted you for years...a grand first date write.
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