My First Car

I sat there in the drivers seat..
smelling that new car smell..
turning the key to my freedom,
I'm now an adult..can't you tell?

Imagining the wind rushing
through my already messy hair..
as I cruised down Route 66,
In my mind not a single care.

It seemed  possibilities were endless..
just how far and how fast to go.
Hearing wheels on the pavement,
for independence I'd struck a blow.

Tomorrow would be soon enough
to think about what I'd done..
A big hole in my meager savings,
and a monthly payments begun.

For Frank's contest...
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Austin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 8:45 AM
This is why, Barb, I drive an old 95 VW Golf. Paid for. No monthly payment. What the hell, it gets me there. Good stuff. Congrats. Love, daver
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Congrats on your win in contest......Luv/Best wishes...........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Barbara, I'm glad this made it into the top places. Congrats on your well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 9:39 PM
beautiful poem Barbara. Many congratulations for this win.
K. Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 6:38 PM
Enjoyed reading (or should I say riding along? ^_~) this wonderful poem about your first car :) congrats on your win, Barbara :) --nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Barbara
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Congrats Barb on your win in Frank's contest with this beautiful write and wonderful entry for the contest... enjoy another grand victory and sweet success today with luv...
Johnson Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Great poem Barbara. We have to pay a price for freedom. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:09 PM
So glad to see you in Frank's winners' circle. Congratulations, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 11:29 AM
That ending is sorta a let down but we enjoyed those days didn't we...Good luck in the contest reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Fraser Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Nice one Barbara, I can just see you sitting there wondering to smile at the car or cry at the payments. Good luck in Frank's contest >> James
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 8:21 PM
AHHHHSOME, BAbara, I hope this does well in the contest, capturing smell and sound in a new car! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Original and delightful entry for the "smell and sound" contest, dear LNC. There is something very special about getting into a new car and enjoying that scent. Wishing you success in the contest. Great humr in the last verse,too. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Very nice memories recollected in tranquility, Barbara
Richards Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Nothing like those first moments in one's life....we never forget the sights, sounds or smells!! A good one to reflect upon...good luck in the contest, Barbara!! :)
Lacey Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 3:55 PM
sounds like the great teenage years! lol
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