Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

My Fire

When I listen to my heart, 
It whispers your name
Everything I’ve never done, 
I want to do with you 
losing all control when I hear 
your voice
Thoughts of you knocks the 
wind out of me most days
These feelings are what others 
have written about, the rhymes 
in all the best poetry 
My heart has always been wild 
and free never letting anyone 
tame me, until you came 
and ignited a blaze inside of me
that brings a flutter deep inside 
that I can not put a name to
Its like my desire cries 
Now life will never be the same
I can never be free because 
you are the reason my flame burns 
so deep and hot...
You are my fire....

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DM Babbit August 10, 2020 at 8:58 AM How well the fires burn. Truly loved this one.

Line Gauthier April 17, 2020 at 6:54 AM Awesome, Brenda. Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:58 AM Thank you line!;)

John Fleming February 16, 2020 at 1:10 AM I agree with Line...indeed it is lovely. A splendid piece of poetry, Brenda. Lots of affection. :) john Brenda Chiri February 19, 2020 at 3:29 PM Thank you dear John ! Hugs!;)

Line Gauthier February 16, 2020 at 12:30 AM Lovely, Brenda. Brenda Chiri February 19, 2020 at 3:29 PM Thank you line does much!()

Paul Callus February 11, 2020 at 3:16 PM A wild and free heart succumbs to a very special love which conquers all. A heartfelt declaration of love which surely cannot be ignored. ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri February 15, 2020 at 1:17 PM Ah Paul thank you so much!;)

Michelle Faulkner February 11, 2020 at 2:24 PM This burns with passion, I love the lines 'everything I've never done/I want to do with you' - magnificent! Brenda Chiri February 15, 2020 at 1:16 PM Thank you I appreciate your visit!;)

James Marshall Goff February 11, 2020 at 12:01 PM Nice Brenda! I know these feelings with my gal... Brenda Chiri February 11, 2020 at 9:03 PM James you are a lucky man then thank you!;)

Eve Roper February 11, 2020 at 9:19 AM A person in love knowing what to look in a person. A fire , but also so much more. Enjoyed reading this romantic write. Eve Brenda Chiri February 11, 2020 at 9:02 PM Thank you eve! Your right it is much much more!;)