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My Fire

When I listen to my heart, It whispers your name Everything I’ve never done, I want to do with you losing all control when I hear your voice Thoughts of you knocks the wind out of me most days These feelings are what others have written about, the rhymes in all the best poetry My heart has always been wild and free never letting anyone tame me, until you came and ignited a blaze inside of me that brings a flutter deep inside that I can not put a name to Its like my desire cries Now life will never be the same I can never be free because you are the reason my flame burns so deep and hot... You are my fire....

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Date: 8/10/2020 8:58:00 AM
How well the fires burn. Truly loved this one.
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Date: 4/17/2020 6:54:00 AM
Awesome, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thank you line!;)
Date: 2/16/2020 1:10:00 AM
I agree with Line...indeed it is lovely. A splendid piece of poetry, Brenda. Lots of affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you dear John ! Hugs!;)
Date: 2/16/2020 12:30:00 AM
Lovely, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you line does much!()
Date: 2/11/2020 3:16:00 PM
A wild and free heart succumbs to a very special love which conquers all. A heartfelt declaration of love which surely cannot be ignored. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/15/2020 1:17:00 PM
Ah Paul thank you so much!;)
Date: 2/11/2020 2:24:00 PM
This burns with passion, I love the lines 'everything I've never done/I want to do with you' - magnificent!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/15/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate your visit!;)
Date: 2/11/2020 12:01:00 PM
Nice Brenda! I know these feelings with my gal...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 9:03:00 PM
James you are a lucky man then thank you!;)
Date: 2/11/2020 9:19:00 AM
A person in love knowing what to look in a person. A fire , but also so much more. Enjoyed reading this romantic write. Eve
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you eve! Your right it is much much more!;)

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