Home » Poems » Robert Gorelick » My Fickle Valentine

My Fickle Valentine

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Robert Gorelick.

You smiled when you broke my heart in half You said, cheer up babe, here's my autograph Now you're the one played for a fool Oh, how sad, how cruel You swear you love me? Don't make me laugh! 2/13/23

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Michael Tor

Date: 2/23/2023 6:48:00 PM

Treat others how you would want to be treated and she was...

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/21/2023 8:11:00 PM

The kind that hurts but funny in all. Good one, Robert :)

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/23/2023 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Fin

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2023 7:50:00 PM

What goes around, comes around. Ain't it the truth!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/23/2023 4:19:00 PM

"Goody Goody" ain't that the truth!

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/13/2023 5:24:00 PM

Those broken-striken moments..."No tear-tsunami could wash away the wrenching memory of that day" ...sucker-punched! Ka-Pow! Only time heals, we know that now :)

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/23/2023 4:17:00 PM

Time wounds all heels!