Jerry Brotherton Poet Rhyme

My Fear

I know that all good things must meet their fate,
but to die alone would bring such sorrows.
None there to reminisce about the past,
or to ponder upon the tomorrows.

No one there to hold tightly my frail hand,
or to gently caress my leathered cheek.
With no last kiss to soothe my furrowed brow,
no loving words given for memories keep.

No one to whisper a final goodbye,
or to pray for just a little more time.
No one there to dry the tears from my face,
as I succumb to the clocks closing chime. 

To pass unnoticed across the grey veil,
with unfettered tears and shuddering breath.
No one there to hear my last crying sigh,
as my eyes darken with shadows of death.

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Deb M October 9, 2023 at 8:14 AM Oh my Jerry… What a brilliant poem that hits the heart! I would not like to die alone either but l guess we have no say in it! Beautifully said from a loving heart my friend! Debx Jerry Brotherton October 9, 2023 at 8:57 AM Thanks for the kind comment, Deb. I think, if I had a heart attack or something that was quick it would be different than being forced into isolation due to some disease.

Christina Bowring October 7, 2023 at 10:27 AM Jerry my friend this is such a poignant, emotive poem. So well written. Brought back many sad memories- for the past few years I have been frontline Covid here in the Uk and working on a Covid ward have witnessed great loss, grief and yes, lonely deaths. All care workers were there supporting as much as they could, but couldn’t take the place of their loved ones. May we pray the likes of Covid never enters our shores again. Your last two lines really hit home. Christina Bowring October 7, 2023 at 10:32 AM Many fear dying alone, myself included, and I can understand why. Very well expressed and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you :):)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2023 at 2:19 PM - A really sad thought, Jerry - Everyone wants a hand to hold, on the last journey of life :( - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Jerry Brotherton October 6, 2023 at 2:57 PM During Covid, hospitals were keeping people isolated. Many passed away without the comfort of loved ones.

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2023 at 1:05 PM As we grow old we think more of the other side of earth. But I am sure God is compassionate and will forgive. Blessings. Jerry Brotherton October 6, 2023 at 2:54 PM So true Victor.

Terry Flood October 5, 2023 at 2:56 PM I suspect that's a global fear, Jerry and one that comes to pass for too many folk. I only hope if it happens to me, that nothing falls off when they finally find and move me… after all, if there is a heaven, I want it to be heavenly! A most moving write. Jerry Brotherton October 6, 2023 at 2:50 PM Thanks Terry. Yes, it is sad to think of those that had to face the end alone.

Silent One October 5, 2023 at 12:57 PM This is a deeply emotive one.. I can feel the angst and the sadness... touching poem that you have expressed from the bottom of your heart... Jerry Brotherton October 6, 2023 at 2:34 PM Thank you my friend.

Yann Rolland October 5, 2023 at 12:18 PM very touching words, Jerry this is quite emotionnal, i am sure someone will hold your hand, a son or a wife, everyoe deserve that feeling but please wait some more time, take care yann Jerry Brotherton October 6, 2023 at 2:34 PM thanks Yann. This was inspired by the Covid days. People were dying in isolation and allowed no contact with their loved ones.