My Favourite Poem O Depression
My Favourite Poem- O DEPRESSION
O oo la la to my first submission,
D epicts the state of mental turmoil,
E ncourages programmes of mental health,
P promotes that positivity is a path to self healing,
R eviews the peculiarities of brain storm,
E xpresses that every cloud has a silver lining,
S hows a situation more felt than seen,
S ocial awareness for the people to empathize,
I ncoherent though, but can be dealt with tactfully
O pportunity for a home page feature,
N otification for the sufferers to be watchful.
This is a portion of my original poem O DEPRESSION,..written in slow motion for contest "Your favourite poem ".....Ooops,I got late..anyways thanks to the contest for motivating.
Rizwana Bhurani
12.11.2015
Copyright © Rizwana Bhurani | Year Posted 2015
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