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Whirlwind - Revised With Music

Caught up in a whirlwind, whirling and twirling, Caught up in a whirlwind tossing and turning, REFRAIN: churning and burning inside my heart. tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. take me away . Caught up in a daydream, wanting and needing, Caught up in a daydream, loving and lusting,. REFRAIN: churning and burning inside my heart. tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. take me away take me away Caught up in a love snare, hoping and thinking Caught up in a love snare, reeling with feeling REFRAIN: churning and burning inside my heart. tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. take me away take me away take me away take me away take me away take me away away away away away away take me away....

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Maria Williams

Date: 7/11/2017 6:38:00 AM

How wonderful is this Carole? The lyrics, the music, the singer. In a word Awesome. You are indeed a very talented woman. Bravo... Maria

Carole Duet
Date: 7/13/2017 12:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maria. I love music and I'm glad you liked this one. Carole Duet

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/24/2017 10:20:00 PM

JUST LISTENED TO THIS EPIC BEAUTY BEING SUNG. CONGRATS ON CREATING THIS GEM MY FRIEND! Bravo!!!

Carole Duet
Date: 4/24/2017 11:34:00 PM

Well thank you so so much, Robert. I love music and I very much enjoy this aspect of writing poetry. And, Mark Massey wrote and sang the music for me. Couldn't have done it without him.

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/16/2017 2:41:00 PM

Hi Carole, you have my head spinning, lovely write :))

Carole Duet
Date: 4/16/2017 10:06:00 PM

Well, I'm so glad you like it, Nial. And thanks for dropping by. Carole Duet

Roy Pett

Date: 4/16/2017 10:18:00 AM

Brilliant poem Carole, look forward to hearing this piece when you set it to music, good luck in contest. :))

Carole Duet
Date: 4/16/2017 10:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Roy. I can't wait! Carole Duet

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2017 4:51:00 PM

Top class work my friend. I can see that fine piece set to music and flowing along.. Great melody!!

Carole Duet
Date: 4/26/2017 1:41:00 PM

Thanks for listening to the song, Robert. So glad you liked it...and yes, Mark is a "fine singer". He has such feeling in his vocals. He also played the guitar on this piece as well as my others. Carole Duet

Carole Duet
Date: 4/26/2017 1:34:00 PM

Carole Duet
Date: 4/26/2017 1:32:00 PM

Robert Lindley
Date: 4/24/2017 10:21:00 PM

I was lucky to check tonight and find this gem recorded into a great song. Congrats to you and the fine singer both...

Carole Duet
Date: 4/13/2017 11:53:00 PM

Thanks, Robert. I really appreciate that. I can't wait to make it into a song! Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2017 7:06:00 PM

very nice and now I know why you are called DUET!!

Carole Duet
Date: 4/12/2017 11:03:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Yes, I love music and it will be set to music soon...but it won't be a Carol or a Duet. lol

Chris Green

Date: 4/11/2017 7:24:00 AM

I love this, the words have a melody all their own. I would really enjoy hearing the music you had in mind when you wrote this wonderful piece.

Carole Duet
Date: 4/12/2017 11:01:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. It is meant for music but I'm not the musician that Mark Massey is. He will set it to music for me. So...stand by. It's coming. Carole

Darren White

Date: 4/11/2017 1:40:00 AM

I hear this set to music indeed, it's absolutely beautiful :) I love your daydream in a whirlwind....

Carole Duet
Date: 4/12/2017 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Darren. I can't wait to put it to music. Carole

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/11/2017 1:17:00 AM

Hi Carole, set to the proper music this could be such a wonderful song. The words truly sing off the page. A "Whirlwind" of majestic words. This has to be a seven for sure. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carole Duet
Date: 4/12/2017 10:58:00 AM

Hi Mike and thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Very encouraging. Music to come....Carole xx