Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

My Favorite Animal Angel

A rescue dog she would be,                                                                                                      her halo was bright for all to see.                                                                                            She loved her blusher on both cheeks,                                                                                  the pink color she would seek.                                                                                          Riding in a car was a huge thrill,                                                                                               I made it a big deal.                                                                                                           With our seat belts now on,                                                                                                   we were both ready to make the car run.                                                                          Night was massage time as we drift off to sleep,                                                                    in the morning from the bed we would leap.                                                                       Now Angel is gone to heaven to wait,                                                                                   the rainbow bridge I need to cross has no date.

Date  12/24/2019

Place 8th    Writing Prompt - Take the Dagger Out  Contest Judged:  2/19/2020  Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
1. Date Written 12/24/2019 
2. Your Favorite Animal Poetry Contest
3. January 8, 2020

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Constance La France February 22, 2020 at 6:16 PM Paula, I like your poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, it would have placed much higher but I could not follow the rhyme pattern, still a great write _Constance Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2020 at 7:16 PM Thank You, for your note and information. I am honored with the win. I hope to do better next time with the pattern.....................

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2019 at 2:36 PM Aw, so filled with love,...and please make sure that you don't cross that bridge for quite a while. Cheers, Gershon Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2019 at 4:09 PM Thanks for your note. It is always good to hear from other writers. What a great bridge it will be. Have a great 2020..................

Vijay Pandit December 29, 2019 at 2:18 PM This poem flows from a loving heart--a lovely tribute you wrote Paula. Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2019 at 2:37 PM She was one in a million. Thanks for reading & writing. Have a great 2020..................

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2019 at 1:15 PM - A wonderful poem, Paula ... I hope it will be a top win for you ... good luck :) - Happy New Year 2020 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2019 at 2:36 PM "Thank You," for the good luck. Hope you have a great 2020. Hugs back...................

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2019 at 9:01 PM love this one. And I know she awaits you as my dear dog awaits me too. Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2019 at 12:59 PM Yes, they do wait for us. Thanks for your note. Happy New Year 2020........

Ann Foster December 26, 2019 at 2:51 PM rainbow bridge... forever in my happy thoughts... thank you for that. Lovely write. More please... Ann Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 5:55 PM Glad you like it. Thanks for writing. More to come......

Gershon Wolf December 26, 2019 at 2:30 PM May it be a while before the reunion -- That'll make it even sweeter! :) gw Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 5:45 PM Thanks for reading & writing. Happy New Year 2020.......

Winged Warrior December 26, 2019 at 11:35 AM All animals are angels...come to show us, unconditional love...lovely write my friend...may you have a beautiful holiday season...love is all and all is love...^WW^ :o) Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 5:44 PM You are so right. All animals show us, unconditional love. It would be great if people would would learn how to do it. Glad you like it. Thanks for your words. I needed it. Happy New Year 2020.......

Pratap Roy December 25, 2019 at 11:36 PM Nice tribute to Angel. God bless you. Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 9:29 AM Thanks for reading & writing to me............

Caren Krutsinger December 24, 2019 at 10:12 PM A beautiful tribute to Angel. Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2019 at 9:29 AM Thank You, for you note. Enjoy your day writing away................