My Father's Voice

On a dry summer day like this,
my three young daughters 
all gone to their three separate homes
with their three separate mothers,
the silence would be unbearable
in this hollow shell of a house 
if not for the quart of troubled water
brought to a rolling boil, awaiting 
Ramen noodles, ever hopeful 
it might spill over and agitate the burner.
It is easy to imagine, on such a day,
my father’s voice the afternoon
he left without a single word of reason,
goodbye, or half-meant encouragement,
while I watch a tumble-weed stumble across
a Texas plain, swept by June’s indifferent wind.


12/2/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cornish Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Exceptional writing Phillip
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Pure melancholy free verse poetry, Phillip. The emotions oozes w/somber tenderness. A very thoughtful write. Marvelous poem! Love and smiles and smiles of joy.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Heartfelt meaning flows from your moving lines in this piece Phillip. This is a poet's poem! Lovely! : ) xxoo
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:05 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Phillip :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Phillip, your as bad as I. 3 sons and so on :) and love them all. and those tumble weeds are beautiful in their own environment. Congratulations on your win.
Faulkner Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 3:48 PM
There is so much longing and regret in this, congratulations on your placement!
One Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 10:56 AM
This is a good poem Phillip, but it is not a sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work which is very emotive and expressive. That must be a very bad plight to find oneself in or did it just not happen did it come on after much thought. Sara
Michael Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:58 AM
You expressed yourself well...I imagined that awful Ramen noddles, and that dried up tumble weed rolling over a dusty plain...All the best Phillip
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