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My Father's Voice

On a dry summer day like this, my three young daughters all gone to their three separate homes with their three separate mothers, the silence would be unbearable in this hollow shell of a house if not for the quart of troubled water brought to a rolling boil, awaiting Ramen noodles, ever hopeful it might spill over and agitate the burner. It is easy to imagine, on such a day, my father’s voice the afternoon he left without a single word of reason, goodbye, or half-meant encouragement, while I watch a tumble-weed stumble across a Texas plain, swept by June’s indifferent wind. 12/2/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/23/2018 9:13:00 PM
Exceptional writing Phillip
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Date: 12/11/2018 5:19:00 PM
Pure melancholy free verse poetry, Phillip. The emotions oozes w/somber tenderness. A very thoughtful write. Marvelous poem! Love and smiles and smiles of joy.
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Date: 12/11/2018 5:09:00 PM
Heartfelt meaning flows from your moving lines in this piece Phillip. This is a poet's poem! Lovely! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Phillip :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2018 8:15:00 PM
Phillip, your as bad as I. 3 sons and so on :) and love them all. and those tumble weeds are beautiful in their own environment. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2018 3:48:00 PM
There is so much longing and regret in this, congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 12/8/2018 10:56:00 AM
This is a good poem Phillip, but it is not a sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/5/2018 12:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work which is very emotive and expressive. That must be a very bad plight to find oneself in or did it just not happen did it come on after much thought. Sara
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Date: 12/2/2018 3:58:00 AM
You expressed yourself well...I imagined that awful Ramen noddles, and that dried up tumble weed rolling over a dusty plain...All the best Phillip
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