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Dad died on 12-28-98, I wrote this the next morn, 12-29-98. The words therapy-poured from me. 
posted on Soup - January 1, 2016

DEDICATED TO MY FATHER, WILLIAM CASON GODWIN / 1931 - 1998

MY FATHER, MY DAD

My voice is weak, my hand falters
as I attempt to speak of my Father.
Each night sleep takes me, 
                  then truth awakes me –
my Dad is gone, now dead.
My heart hears this from my head.
Wrapped in numbness, walking in nothingness,
I search for his presence.

The chain’s now broken, its brightest link gone.
My Dad was security and so mentally strong.
His mind quick, his wit sharp,
he always inspired my young heart.
Pleasing my Father was to lasso the sun.
In him my pride was first begun.

I picture his hands, legs and arms –
my protector from harm;
wisdom was his voice, 
                  comforting his every choice,
willpower his motto, sureness his step.
He was a man of incredible depth.
Knowing I am my Father’s daughter 
                  is a thought to be tenderly kept.
His final, “I love you” words, 
                  the most emotion I’ve heard yet.

I will miss you, Daddy.
Now and forever, naught will I forget.
I’ll see you each sunrise,
mourn you each sunset.
Images crash around me, 
                  I’d have it no other way
Than your memory with 
                 me each and every day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashley Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Aw, dear CayaCay, I feel your every word so beautifully, tenderly and emotionally placed with reverence upon the pristine poetic page wanting to accept them. Your father, your dad was remarkable in every way.. and through the power of your poem, that both mourns and celebrates his spirit, his humanity, I feel like I knew him too and I shed a tear of sadness in condolence with you, but also a tear of appreciation for his life well lived. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my gifted poet friend.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 9:39 PM
CayCay, thank you for sharing your heart with us. This, too, will resonate with many. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 14 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 15 has already started.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Back with. Congratulations. Well deserved, Caycay
VanHooser Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 2:42 PM
CayCay, I can empathize. I lost my dad in '86. He was in intensive care and I had to come from Arizona to Missouri, ending up in a blizzard. It took me 20 hours to get to his bedside. I got to take his hand, tell him I was there, and that I loved him. There was the faintest squeeze of my hand and he was gone. I still miss him, and you know what? He is still teaching me things today that I remembered as a boy. I'm sorry for your loss, and it makes this poem even more meaningful. Hugs, Ron
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:59 AM
wow this is really good, Caycay. Very emotive. And I loved the lasso image. If you see the very first comment to this one, I had loved it back then as well . Not sure If I faved it then, but I will now!
Adams Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:07 AM
one of a girls greatest losses is her father, you lost him twice....this poem shows the depths of your love for him and wow's me my friend :) hugs
Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:57 AM
CayCay sweet soul what a trauma you went through and what a trauma our respective children will go through one day - it is like the end of the world has come! There is no replacement - I see you inherited your fathers wit! I still think of my Dad every day - he died at at the age of 66, 22 years ago. Living is to finally grief, but too sad to think like that - I think that is why our poems are earthy and life-like because the are about life. Love you, Jenny
Ibeh Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Great poem, CayCay! Incredibly moving. Thanks for sharing:-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 4:38 AM
You are so fortunate to have had such a close connection with your father as well as your mother. I can feel the closeness in every word and I can tell he must've been quite a wonderful man. Congratulations on your wonderful first placement. It is so deserving. I'm very happy for you.I am sorry you had to say goodbye to you dear father. : ) 7
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Touching, CayCaY! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Very moving, CayCay. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place win. It was wonderful to read again as I share your heavy heart about missing my dad as well. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Hi CayCay, Your heartfelt and poignant write really got to me. My dad meant the world to me . As I gaze upon your words meant for your dad, could have been penned by me . Because I too miss my dad. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. A without a doubt seven and a fav-Alexis
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January 13, 2016 at 12:57 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Beautiful dedication. Congrats on your win.
Cwiak Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:07 PM
I can see him in your words, CayCay. He must have been very close to you. Terrific portrait of him. Good luck in the contest. One thing...first line of the second verse. You mean to say "its" not "it" right?
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much for pointing that out - once a typo is realized, it glares at me! So glad you felt comfortable telling me and I hope it stays that way. We weren't as close as I would have liked, but we loved each other greatly and we lost him way too soon from Agent Orange. He died at 68 and every word I wrote is true. Thank you for commenting ... CayCay
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January 6, 2016 at 11:59 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:54 AM
You are so consistently consistent that I am most impressed by your consistency! Thank you Skat - here's to another year of you being you ... CayCay
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:24 AM
What a very lucky daughter and father. Please forgive the word luck. It is not luck. It's wonderful people.
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:56 AM
No forgiveness needed, I know exactly what you mean and I appreciate you saying it. Thank you, Howard - I don't believe we have 'met' so I've made a mental note to visit your page when time permits. All the best ... CayCay
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:20 PM
You are fortunate to have had him. congratulations. Love, joyce
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:02 AM
I am fortunate to have people like you who leave such touching comments. Thank you ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:35 PM
This is such a beautiful poem about your dear dad, CayCay. I felt the love and emotion in your endearing words, and I was very touched. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Hi, Sweetie. I'm glad to know my emotion came through for it was indeed just that, an emotional and sincere write. Thank you, Sandra - and if I haven't told you already, Happy Everything during a Happy New Year! All the best ... CayCay
Konos Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. It is good to hear your dad was your treasure so beautiful as are you....
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:29 PM
How sweet and very kind. Thank you for giving your time and efforts to all of us here - please know you are appreciated ... CayCay
Lindley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:03 AM
SORRY, I FORGOT. Adding this poem to my fav list. Thanks.
Lindley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:03 AM
A treasure to find this poem this morn. I lost my dad when I was 15 years old-it utterly destroyed me! So much so that even at age 61 now, its a hard subject to write about. I see you summoned up great courage to do so (quite splendidly I might add), maybe I can too.A7
Godwin Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:54 AM
You relate. When one loses their Father, it is like they join the Gone Father Club. This wrote itself a few days after he made his transition as my therapy. How I miss him. I thank you for your warm and kind comments ... CayCay
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:06 PM
OH!!!! What an emotional piece, my dear. I'm very close to my dad so a lot of what you wrote...reverberated in my own heart. You are a wonderful woman...and he must have been...a wonderful man. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:35 PM
I entered a poem I'd written some time ago for the contest. I think our fathers have a lot in common, dear. Hugs
Godwin Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Thank you, Eileen. He was an exceptional man in many ways and I miss him / think of him / remember him each and every day. So many of our poems are our truths ... CayCay
Nunez Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Hi Cay. Powerful emotions set the sail of your words ; love and tenderness lend them beauty. PS. Thank you for your visits to my page. Best and hugs!
Godwin Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Thank you, Sweetie - I've been missing your unique writes. I'll check soon to see if you've been recently inspired. Happy New Year to you ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Emotional and filled to capacity with love and admiration. Wonderfully done my dearest CayCay! Good luck!
Godwin Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Thank you, Demetrios - allow me to wish you a happy everything in 2016 and beyond ... CayCay
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