My Father Gone These Forty Years

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My father gone these forty years,
my mother gone twenty, I remember...
the acrid smell of tobacco on my mother’s rough fingers,
as she sat, silently, in a predawn Texas coastal town,
my head in her lap, the short-wave radio crackling with static.
She strained to hear the chatter of shrimpers in the Gulf of Mexico,
yelling out to each other in Cajun French, Mexican Spanish, accented English.
She stroked my nine-year-old hair,
her middle-aged body aching, hungry, worried, sleepless.
Far from her roots --  stranded -- in this strange, 
dry, totally foreign place.
Her imaginings of my father’s struggles 
with the sea and its weathers filled her mind.  
She knew, all the while, that even
if he were safe, we would still suffer
the poverty of the displaced and desperate,  
whose minor, occasional comforts were only, 
onshore, the cold beers and noisy camaraderie 
of the others like him, like her...like us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/6/2012 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Leo. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2012 1:07:00 PM
Forced resignation. I fear a whole heap of people are in that state these days. You bring it out so well. Congrats on the feature. daver
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Date: 1/5/2012 8:15:00 AM
A facinating poem. Congratulations on being displayed. Your wording and thoughts are written like a pro and truly pull us in. You are Very gifted!
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:13:00 PM
Once again..this is a marvelous nostalgic poem. I think that's the correct word. Your imagery is captivating, the storyline voice well done. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:56:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write so colorful! Such a personal voice if you like please enter it in the contest Real, UNreal, and Surreal [if this is a true story and I think it is on the bottom type category:real] Hope to read more of your work Light & Love
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