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My Eternal Winter

A mirror doesnt always reflect what we see. The scars of mistakes invisable to all. None may understand but me. The sound of the of regrets whisper low and soft into my ear. A constant reminder your no longer here. A closet filled with his sent ii cannot release. As he did part from this life. There is no such thing as rest and peace. Green were the fields when spring knew love. Empty and are the nights. Cloudy and gray as the sky above. Standing alone is that old tree. Eternal is my winter. For nothing is left inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 6:01:00 AM
Sad poem Susan, well written if i may say so>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:23:00 PM
Susan, welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:39:00 PM
Lovely and sad.. I hope that your eternity is not winter..as they say..this to shall pass. Not easily..but given time there is hopel BG
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Date: 7/25/2009 3:08:00 PM
sad but beautiful , well done :)
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Date: 7/25/2009 12:13:00 PM
Very descriptive Rhyme and very poetic. Keep writing. Sara
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