My Endless Crying

My endless crying
I don’t know where to start 
 From a Present full of pain and little happiness 
 From my past, dark with too much sadness 
Few spots of light and little happiness
 Moments of happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!
They disappeared in the ocean of my sadness 
Remembering them, makes smile
When I used to know how to smile  
Before I sink in the hardship of the life
 Many times I want to cry 
Sometimes I want to scream loud
But then I remember in the past
They used to say its shame for a man to cry 
They used to say men do not cry
But I say that is all lie no one cry as hard as men cry
No one cry as much as men cry
We cannot publicly cry
We have to hide our tears when we cry 
Men are good to hide their pain and tears 
They should remain strong 
But they cry when they are alone
Their tears is too precious to be seen 
If only the walls of the houses talk
If only the eyes of the men talk
If only the tears of the men talk
If only the pillows on their bed talk
They will say how much men cry in the dark
Is it my fate to cry forever?
Is it my destiny any way I turn ends up with great pain 
Or it's my mischief on earth, and this is my punishing
I care no more, what is going to be, let it be 
Let the angel of death land in my world
Let them take my soul 
Let them put end to this endless sadness 
Let my eyes rest and drop no more tears 
Let my heart grief no more
Let my sadness come to the end 
Let people In the world care for their loved one 
They should know men cry when they are alone 
 They need someone to wipe their tears 
they need love  not to  die alone
Die alone ……………………
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/17/2013 1:44:00 PM
Men cry in thoughts not usually heard And women feign to hear them. We are taught in childhood, that it is not manly to cry. We believe, so we cry alone.
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Date: 1/3/2013 3:09:00 AM
Can feel the pain. There is a God who is with you in secret, who can understand. Good write!
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:29:00 PM
Hakeem, your poem is written with great compassion, I feel the strong emotions you use while writing your poem. I think all men are alike in their own way. Especially when they cry behind close doors.. tears are a powerful energy we can hide.. enjoyed your soup-mail, and poem,,, always~ pd
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