My Dream Within A Dream

I awoke from a dream -- 
well, let me start again:
My thought was that I had
awakened.  Yet, I rose quite
mistily -- with ghastly figures
hanging in the air, moving
to and fro, in possessed manner. 

Swat at them, I could not.  My
arms would not lift, my hands
seeming porcelain objects.  Residue 
stillness, long after the model
had expired, and the artist had eaten
his last moistened bread meal.

The volume of Poe, lie open
on the bedstead, where it had been
wearily placed, just before my
dozing.  Strange, the last page read had 
been altered...and the name highlighted
for death, was now my own.  Could
this deranged volume and I have
mysteriously, mystically changed
realities?  My name began
to burn, uplift from the page, the savage
apparitions swarming to tear hungrily at the 
fleeing image.  My soul drowning in drool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/15/2025 11:46:00 PM
What a dream ! Poe can have that effect. ThkU for sharing, Joe. X.
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Date: 9/15/2025 9:35:00 PM
Oh my goodness so dark!! But very Poe-ish. So creative, Joe
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Date: 9/15/2025 7:51:00 PM
A brilliantly unsettling descent ,the Poe-like dreamscape, trembling imagery, and raw, claustrophobic voice make the horror feel intimate and immediate. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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