My Dream Within A Dream

By Poet "Our memories fill yesterday. Today our dreams will fill tomorrow."

Will my dream be here tomorrow? A cool breeze does softy blow, over me as if I will know. Into deeper sleep I must go, what will my dream now show? I am still from head to toe, feeling like I am aglow. Another world I will go.
Within a dream what will I see? A huge yellow bumble bee, she was eating crackers and brie. From this dream I want to flee, please oh - please set me free. My bed is now wet - I did pee, let me out I will plea. Now awake one, two, three.
My dream within a dream, was it just too extreme? It made me pee then scream, what a very wild dream theme. The bee rode a leaf downstream, what a weird bee daydream. Through the trees I saw a sunbeam, the bright light looks like ice cream. Now waking up with self esteem.
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La France Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:40 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my Dream Within A Dream contest, judged 09/29. Your poem is wonderful and I like the quote, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Congratulation. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, wonderful. Also glad you like my quote. I love humor and making people smile/laugh. I loved writing this for your wonderful contest. Thanks for your hard work on the contests and for my placement. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away............
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Congratulation. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, Creative winning work. I love humor and making people smile/laugh. I loved writing this fun Dream write. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away............
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Love the honey and the bee. Great humor throughout… Lol Congrats, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 9:19 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Congratulation. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, Great humor throughout…. Glad you love my huge yellow bumble bee. I love humor and I loved writing this fun write. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away............
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:41 AM
"2 Place" "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme ~~ Date Written:9/8/2025 ~~ Written By Human Poet.....
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:51 AM
- Back with a congratulation, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Congratulation. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write again. Always great to see you. It was a ton of fun to write. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Derden Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Absurdist, and that makes it fun! The poem tumbles through surreal whimsy and bodily mishaps, blending childlike imagination with a cheeky sense of chaos.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write. It was a ton of fun to write. Dreams sometime come with a chill and sometimes are just fun. Yes, my huge yellow bumble bee, she was eating crackers and brie was very childlike. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Good one! I would want to stay in the dream with the crackers and bree!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be a, Good one. I guess this dream needed some tea to go with the crackers, brie and huge yellow bumble bee. Hahaha!!!! I love humor and I loved writing this fun write. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away............
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Paula, your poem is both entertaining and creative; you can never tell what the dream universe has in store. - Good luck in the contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, both entertaining and creative. Yes, one never knows what the dream universe will bring to us.  Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Narain Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:07 AM
A fun poem. Dreams can be sweet as well as disturbing sometimes.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:14 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, A fun poem.  Yes, one never knows what a dream will bring.  I love humor and I love to write in it. "Smile" they are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:10 AM
- You never know what the dream world will show... a fun and creative poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 11:46 AM
I posted my contribution today :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, a fun and creative poem. Yes, one never knows what a dream will bring. It was so much fun to write. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
George Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Your poem does justice to the topic... ! It is equally hilarious. Your sense of humor shines in most of your poems. Sad, the dream made your bed sheet wet! All the Best dear Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:05 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to, do justice to the topic... ! It is equally hilarious. I love humor and I love to write in it.  "Smile" they are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Anaya Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 9:07 PM
A night terror can make us cry out. It's always a good thing we have that mechanism that lets us wake up. It gave me chills Paula, great monorhymes! xX
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write. It was a ton of fun to write. Yes, dreams sometime with a chill and sometimes just have fun. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
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September 8, 2025 at 5:50 PM
this is truly creative, Paula. I smiled when I read: My bed is now wet - I did pee, let me out I will plea. Now awake one, two, three. Best wishes with this contest entry. hugs & blessings, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you enjoyed my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write. I am happy I could give you a smile. "Smile" They are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 12:40 PM
"My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme ~~ Date Written:9/8/2025 ~~ Written By Human Poet.....
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