My Dream Vacation

My dream vacation flies me to the Holy Land where my Saviour spent His earthly existence sublime… There in Bethlehem, I will behold the Emmanuel’s humble birthplace and be seized with gripping condescension-pangs cognizant that the glorious King of kings in His fleshly nature was a “babe wrapped in swaddling clothes, lying in a manger* having farm animals as first greeters and jubilant shepherds as guests. Then I will bask under the azure sky while visiting the Jordan River to witness by faith the baptism of Jesus Christ, manifesting the Triune God with the Holy Ghost descending “in a bodily shape like a dove upon him…” and be awed by God the Father’s voice out from a bright cloud saying “This is my beloved Son, in whom I am well pleased; hear ye him.”** Surely, I will delight to venture out to the Sea of Galilee where the Lord calmed the storm with His “Peace be still”*** as well as in the Garden of Gethsemane and be drawn to persist with Him in His supplication-struggle, since “in an agony he prayed more earnestly: and his sweat was as it were great drops of blood falling down to the ground.” Oh, I will trek along Mt. Calvary where the Redeemer ascended to be crucified for mankind’s salvation, freeing sinners from damnation and be grateful for His glorious assertion, “It is finished.”**** Never will I exempt the Garden Tomb to worship the Almighty with praise and be enthralled with the assertion: “He is not here; He is risen.”***** By the grace of God I claim for fruitful seeds as this dream vacation blossoms.
*Luke 2:12; **Luke 3:22; ***Mark 4:39; ****John 19:30; *****Matthew 28:6. March 21, 2022 5th place, "MY DREAM VACATION" Imagism Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by L MILTON HANKINS; judged on 4/1/2022.

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Date: 4/3/2022 3:49:00 AM
Beautifully written poem my dear friend Beata. I pray that your dream vacation will come true. Israel is really a very nice place. I was there 2013 and again I feel the great desire to go back after reading your superb write. You may drop by Jordan too if you go there. Congratulations on your shining win! Thanks for sharing.God bless. Hugs
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Date: 4/2/2022 4:22:00 AM
What a lovely penning Beata ! Fortunately I could visit the Holy Land in 2011. I visited, Tabor hills, Galilee lake and had a small cruise, Jordan river, Olive Mount, Gethsemane Garden and all the places you have mentioned ! We were fortunate to have attended a mass in the open in the Garden Of Gethsemane where Jesus sweated blood . It was a great experience. The memories of my visit are revived on reading your poem ! May God let your wish be fulfilled. Congratulations on your win !
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Date: 4/1/2022 6:36:00 PM
May your dream vacation come true and be the inspiration for sharing your faith with all who need to hear it there Congratulations on a fine poem, Beata.
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:27:00 AM
Spiritual journey. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2022 7:49:00 AM
An exceptionally well-written piece, Beata. Congratulations on your fine spot in my placements. Your poem was simply beautiful.
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Date: 3/22/2022 1:18:00 PM
Lovely piece Beata, lovely imagery and insightfulness telling your dream of going to Israel. Blessings always,Gordon
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