Constance La France Poet Imagism

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My Dream Vacation

My dream vacation is to Paris, France,
I want to explore the avenues and hidden streets; 
it is a beautiful city full of charm and history, 
and at an outdoor café I will have some wine.

(And people watch) 

I will gaze at famous monuments, 
go to the top of the Eiffel Tower for a great view; 
listen to street opera that breaks my heart, 
and at a museum I will admire famous art. 

(It could take days)

I want to drift down the Seine by boat, 
see mossy tombs in cemeteries overflowing; 
walk the cobbled boulevards in a raincoat,
go to Parc de Belleville to see the flowers.

(It will be magical)

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March 09, 2022


Poetry/Imagism/My Dream Vacation
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1437-643-09
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, My Dream Vacation
sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 04/01/2022

Tenth Place

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Len Gasun April 3, 2022 at 4:12 AM This superb write will make me dream to go there too. I pray that your dream vacation will come true my dear friend, Constance. Congratulations on your shining win and your amazing piece! Thanks for sharing. Hugs. Constance La France April 3, 2022 at 2:11 PM Len, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs ~Constance

Beata Agustin April 2, 2022 at 3:29 AM Wow! Congrats! It's my prayer that the Lord will grant your dream vacation... God bless you. Constance La France April 2, 2022 at 7:42 AM Beata, thank you so much for the compliment, congrats and comment, blessings ~Constance

Reason A. Poteet April 1, 2022 at 6:47 PM Paris sounds like a place with many sights to see and enjoy. I'm with you, a vacation in Paris would be perfect. Like your format here, Constance, creative and appealing. Congratulations. Constance La France April 2, 2022 at 7:44 AM Karen, thank you so much for your comment and congratulations, it is my dream to go there ~Constance Constance La France April 2, 2022 at 7:43 AM Reason, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~Constance Karen Croft April 1, 2022 at 10:16 PM I would love to visit Paris and sip wine and eat fancy cheese!. Congratulations on your placement!

Paula Goldsmith April 1, 2022 at 11:18 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative/wonderful~~story/write. Also love the colorful picture. Have a blessed day with your win............... Constance La France April 2, 2022 at 7:45 AM Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem and image, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex April 1, 2022 at 9:32 AM Great creations with realistic visuals. Congratulations! Constance La France April 1, 2022 at 10:13 AM Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2022 at 8:09 AM So awesome, Constance. did you never get to go there. I am so thankful it was part of my experience in the 70's when I did Madrid program at my school. I can see you going to all those places, especially the Louvre. you would be in heaven. Congrats to you. Constance La France April 1, 2022 at 10:14 AM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, sadly, it is just a dream so far, it is the home of my ancestors and I long to go ~Constance

L Milton Hankins April 1, 2022 at 7:55 AM Constance, I loved the way you approached this dream vacation. Unique and very interesting. Congratulations! You brought back memories of my own trip to Paris many years ago. Constance La France April 1, 2022 at 10:15 AM Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and for my placement, and the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Joanna Daniel March 10, 2022 at 5:05 AM Hmm, I can dream along with you, Constance:) Constance La France March 11, 2022 at 2:09 PM Jo, thank you so much for the visit and comment, oh yes come dream with me because that is all it is ~Constance

Terry Miller March 10, 2022 at 12:50 AM Excellent poem Paris captured, good luck in the contest. Constance La France March 11, 2022 at 2:10 PM Terry, thank you so much for the compliment, visit, and encouragement ~Constance

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 9, 2022 at 11:34 PM You captured the essence of Paris so beautifully, Constance, I felt I am reliving my experience. Constance La France March 11, 2022 at 2:12 PM Subimal, thank you so much for the visit and comment and compliment, I have read so much about Paris, that I feel like I have been there already, in fact, right now I am staring at a huge print of Paris at night with the Eiffel Tower lit up ~Constance

Bj Legros Kelley March 9, 2022 at 9:57 PM Such a sweet dream Constance! You portrayed the images and sensations as if you were already reliving a dream come true, this is so beautiful. I hope your dream comes true! ~BJ Constance La France March 11, 2022 at 2:13 PM BJ, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment on my poem, yes, it is but a dream at the moment ~Constance