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Watercolor Painting, French, Bar, Brasserie, Cafe

My dream vacation is to Paris, France, I want to explore the avenues and hidden streets; it is a beautiful city full of charm and history, and at an outdoor café I will have some wine. (And people watch) I will gaze at famous monuments, go to the top of the Eiffel Tower for a great view; listen to street opera that breaks my heart, and at a museum I will admire famous art. (It could take days) I want to drift down the Seine by boat, see mossy tombs in cemeteries overflowing; walk the cobbled boulevards in a raincoat, go to Parc de Belleville to see the flowers. (It will be magical) _______________________ March 09, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/My Dream Vacation Copyright Protected, ID 03-1437-643-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, My Dream Vacation sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 04/01/2022 Tenth Place

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Date: 4/3/2022 4:12:00 AM
This superb write will make me dream to go there too. I pray that your dream vacation will come true my dear friend, Constance. Congratulations on your shining win and your amazing piece! Thanks for sharing. Hugs.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2022 2:11:00 PM
Len, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs ~Constance
Date: 4/2/2022 3:29:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! It's my prayer that the Lord will grant your dream vacation... God bless you.
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Date: 4/2/2022 7:42:00 AM
Beata, thank you so much for the compliment, congrats and comment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/1/2022 6:47:00 PM
Paris sounds like a place with many sights to see and enjoy. I'm with you, a vacation in Paris would be perfect. Like your format here, Constance, creative and appealing. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/2/2022 7:44:00 AM
Karen, thank you so much for your comment and congratulations, it is my dream to go there ~Constance
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Date: 4/2/2022 7:43:00 AM
Reason, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~Constance
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:16:00 PM
I would love to visit Paris and sip wine and eat fancy cheese!. Congratulations on your placement!
Date: 4/1/2022 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/wonderful~~story/write. Also love the colorful picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 4/2/2022 7:45:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem and image, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/1/2022 9:32:00 AM
Great creations with realistic visuals. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:13:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 4/1/2022 8:09:00 AM
So awesome, Constance. did you never get to go there. I am so thankful it was part of my experience in the 70's when I did Madrid program at my school. I can see you going to all those places, especially the Louvre. you would be in heaven. Congrats to you.
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:14:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, sadly, it is just a dream so far, it is the home of my ancestors and I long to go ~Constance
Date: 4/1/2022 7:55:00 AM
Constance, I loved the way you approached this dream vacation. Unique and very interesting. Congratulations! You brought back memories of my own trip to Paris many years ago.
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:15:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and for my placement, and the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/10/2022 5:05:00 AM
Hmm, I can dream along with you, Constance:)
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Date: 3/11/2022 2:09:00 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the visit and comment, oh yes come dream with me because that is all it is ~Constance
Date: 3/10/2022 12:50:00 AM
Excellent poem Paris captured, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/11/2022 2:10:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment, visit, and encouragement ~Constance
Date: 3/9/2022 11:34:00 PM
You captured the essence of Paris so beautifully, Constance, I felt I am reliving my experience.
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Date: 3/11/2022 2:12:00 PM
Subimal, thank you so much for the visit and comment and compliment, I have read so much about Paris, that I feel like I have been there already, in fact, right now I am staring at a huge print of Paris at night with the Eiffel Tower lit up ~Constance
Date: 3/9/2022 9:57:00 PM
Such a sweet dream Constance! You portrayed the images and sensations as if you were already reliving a dream come true, this is so beautiful. I hope your dream comes true! ~BJ
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Date: 3/11/2022 2:13:00 PM
BJ, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment on my poem, yes, it is but a dream at the moment ~Constance

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