Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

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"Dream Destination" Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Sotto Poet.  Written:12/9/2025

My Dream Destination

A far off land I would love to see,
where the land is unique and free.
Green valleys to waterfalls to a pretty blue sea,   
soft warm sand beneath my feet fills me with glee.
I could learn about a new culture and to waterski,
while dancing traditional dance under the huge tree.
My dream destination must wait for me,
but I can dream away, will you agree?
Yes, dream all about my heavenly trip is my plea,
I can smell the colorful flowers, food and tea.
My far off place is called Tahiti to see a bee.

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Paula Goldsmith January 5, 2026 at 8:08 AM "3 Place"  My Dream Destination (Rhyme) ~ Date Written: 12/9/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...... Bartholomew Williams January 6, 2026 at 2:42 PM Congratulations Human Poet (i.e., Paula Goldsmith) on your strong showing with this delightful, creative write! Way to go!! Very best, Bartholomew

Karen Jones January 5, 2026 at 12:45 AM Back to say congratulations on your win with this fun write! Paula Goldsmith January 5, 2026 at 8:08 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Also Thank You for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun dream trip again. It is always great to see you here. I have Never been to Tahiti. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away. Thank You, for reading/writing in 2025 on my work. "Happy New Year 2026" Have A Very Blessed New Year Writing Away......................

Bartholomew Williams December 31, 2025 at 10:25 PM Paula, nice (mono)rhyme here!! Tahiti would be a fascinating place to visit and explore. With a lot of imagination and imagery mixed in, I appreciate your write. Very best, Bartholomew Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2026 at 12:50 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti. I would love to go one day. Maybe??? I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away. Thank You, for reading/writing in 2025 on my work. "Happy New Year 2026" Have A Very Blessed New Year Writing Away......................

Line Gauthier December 16, 2025 at 2:38 PM Tahiti is a wonderful dream vacation indeed, Paula ~ Paula Goldsmith December 17, 2025 at 12:27 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti. I would love to go one day. Maybe??? I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Constance La France December 14, 2025 at 3:55 AM Paula, lovely and best of luck in the contest ~ Paula Goldsmith December 14, 2025 at 9:19 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Also Thank You for your, best of luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun dream trip to be, lovely. It was fun to write. I have Never been to Tahiti. Maybe I will get there one day. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Sara Kendrick December 13, 2025 at 11:42 AM Ahh!! Maybe that dream destination will come true. Thank you for sharing the dream with us. Sara K Paula Goldsmith December 14, 2025 at 9:16 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti. I would love to go one day. Maybe??? I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

David Crandall December 12, 2025 at 2:56 PM Fun poem - Tahiti does seem like a dream destination! Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2025 at 7:30 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you found my fun dream trip to be a, Fun poem. It was fun to write. I have Never been to Tahiti. Maybe I will get there one day. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Karen Jones December 12, 2025 at 1:06 PM Enjoyed your poem. It was a harder to do form mono rhyme which was fun to read! Good luck in the contest! Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2025 at 7:28 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Also Thank You for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti. I would love to go one day. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Christuraj Alex December 11, 2025 at 9:18 PM A very beautiful writing on Tahiti. Paula Goldsmith December 12, 2025 at 8:17 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go one day. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Daniel Henry Rodgers December 11, 2025 at 9:35 AM Hello Paula, such a lovely, lush expression of a perfect getaway! It's clear that Tahiti isn't just a place on a map for you; it's a vibrant, colorful dream you can already taste and smell. Keep holding onto that beautiful vision! Happy dreaming, Dear Paula, Daniel Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:39 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go one day. Dreams are what life is all about. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Joseph P. DiMino December 11, 2025 at 7:20 AM Sounds delightful. Hope you get your dream. We live life...but dreams are what keep us going. Blessings my friend. Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:35 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. You are so right, dreams are what keep us going. Without a dream, what do we have???? I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

sara Etgen-Baker December 10, 2025 at 5:55 PM how magnificent Tahiti would be....the warm, sunny beaches sound wonderful right now, hugs, Sara Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:32 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go. What a wonderful trip it would be. I will keep dreaming about it. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Jay Narain December 10, 2025 at 10:45 AM Nice poem. Make your dream come true. Who would not like to visit Tahiti? Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:30 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you found my fun dream trip to be a, Nice poem. I have Never been to Tahiti. For now I will dream about it.  Maybe one day??? I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Beryl Edmonds December 10, 2025 at 8:21 AM A lovely dream destination it would be Paula, Tahiti, the sea and a buzzing bee… Beryl Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:26 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti. I would love to go. For now, I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Valsa George December 10, 2025 at 5:25 AM Keep dreaming of visiting an enchanted land. Don't stop with simply dreaming. Make it turn into a reality. Now everything is possible as the world has shrunk into a global village. Beautiful poem, dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:24 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you found my fun dream trip to be a, Beautiful poem. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go one day. Maybe??? I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Victor Buhagiar December 10, 2025 at 1:17 AM What a lovely dream! Imagery is excellent. Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 12:22 PM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you found my fun dream trip to be, a lovely dream and Imagery is excellent. It was fun to bring to life. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Gershon Wolf December 9, 2025 at 9:46 PM Tahiti sounds too good to be true. Is it? Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 7:15 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti" story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I have Never been to Tahiti but I would love to go. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2025 at 12:08 PM If in Tahiti I won’t be looking at the bees. Could this be a metaphor? Certainly bask in the sun, play with the surf, enjoy paradise…even if it’s in your hope chest ;) Paula Goldsmith December 11, 2025 at 7:13 AM Great to see you here reading/writing on my "Tahiti " story. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun dream trip. I will dream about my feet being in the soft sand as I write away...............

Paula Goldsmith December 9, 2025 at 11:23 AM My Dream Destination (Rhyme) ~ Date Written: 12/9/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......