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My Dream Date

How I weave fancies around my dream date If time could satisfy some of my whims, I would, like a sprightly fawn, hop and jump Jubilant, jocular, joyous, and juvenile! Between the departing day and the descending night If it suddenly rains as a bolt from the blue With no umbrella to shield our heads How I wish to walk with you My hands twined around your waist, With no one else but only you and me. When the sun hides behind the Western ghats Bleeding red and waxing pale How I wish to ramble hand in hand Along the seashore under the canopy of the sky Sharing silent thoughts and counting the waves Lost in our private world, just you and me! On a bright clear day when the Southern Bay Like a voluptuous maid lies draped in blue And its placid surface dotted with sailing boats, How I wish to get into one And drift afar to some unknown destination With no one else but you and me Somewhere in a sheltered nook, Screened from the buzzing crowd with a river winding by And the clear waters snoozing on the white sand, In a small, sequestered cottage, Where nightly winds flute on the windowpanes How I wish to spend a night with only you and me There as we stand in a tight warm embrace, When your hot breath falls on the nape of my neck, And as you pant with passion and call me ‘My love’ How I wish to get enrobed in your mystery And sail down to the abyss of an unknown experience When nobody else matters, but only you and me! ………………………….......................................... Feb.7. 2023 ~ Placed First~ My Dream Date Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 2/22/2023 8:37:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your first place win, Valsa.
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Date: 2/22/2023 5:58:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your top win dear Valsa. Indeed your poem is deserving of the best praise.
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Date: 2/21/2023 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write/ending. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 2/8/2023 12:50:00 PM
The imagery was lovely. It seems you've dreamed this dream many times. Thank you for sharing it with us, my dear friend. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 2/7/2023 9:36:00 PM
Oh wow! Such a beautiful romantic dream!
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Date: 2/7/2023 1:10:00 PM
I love yours, Valsa. SO romantic and similar to my own dream date
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Date: 2/7/2023 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful romantic verse Valsa, there is no better feeling than being in love with the soul mate of your dreams. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/7/2023 7:56:00 AM
Valsa, you've written a beautiful and profound poem! This poetry was already lovely, but your rich imagery elevated it to new heights. While softly wandering in the arms of one's lover, one might happily recollect lovely and passionate memories. I truly enjoy how you portray the attraction that emotions crave.
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Date: 2/7/2023 6:12:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in romantic thoughts ambling in the arms of the beloved, Valsa. Enjoyed the allures you convey that passions dream of.
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Date: 2/7/2023 5:36:00 AM
"I would, like a sprightly fawn, hop and jump Jubilant, jocular, joyous, and juvenile!" -- Really just too many marvelous images in this poem to pick out a few and do it justice. Original and perfect! "Somewhere in a sheltered nook, Screened from the buzzing crowd with a river winding by" -- absolutely enchanting! I think you could have a winner here.
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Date: 2/7/2023 4:09:00 AM
A date dreams are made of. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I believe it could be a good contender for the contest. Decidedly a good entry. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
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Date: 2/7/2023 2:05:00 AM
Lovely dream date. I had one once but my mother was against it as I had not yet qualified for a job. Your poem is full of emotion and imagery. Well done dear Valsa.
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:22:00 PM
How lovely is this Valsa? You took me on a wonderful love adventure that was meant for only you and him. Your prince of Choice. Lovely to read of your Dream date...
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