My Divide

Sitting here inside myself I suffer from the air around me as it steals my breath, Wonder if anyone notices this pain tormenting me so...I'm vulnerable around him and he can't even see it, this thing deep within, It burns so bad I can't stop it, My melody has left my soul as the inspiration abandons me with the sound of his footsteps leaving. Gone from my range of hearing, my knees buckle beneath me as I think of those who replace me, Those who are better off with him than I, My stars dull in the sky as my world falls apart, There is no light to break up this dark around me..No more looking at him to help spread my wings, They simply tremble an fall to the earth, His beauty no longer holds me up...this distance kills my heart every beat it takes, the fading of the colors engulf me I no longer see my dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/3/2014 2:22:00 AM
With him or without him I hope you can still see and catch back your dreams. Human emotions are to be ruled By ourselves I believe, and not the other way around by anyone or anything, but this my personal belief anyway. Enjoyed your poetic piece! Cheers! ;) xxxx D.
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