My Disney Day

My stress was through the roof before
This day at last arrived.
So many problems could crop up,
Plus I was sleep-deprived.

The heat, the crowds, the lines, the waits,
The grandkids, 2 and 4-ish,
As well as my devoted aunt,
Who's 89 or more-ish.

Yet it indeed was magical -
"A Small World" ride and others,
Amazing since this trip, I'd never
Choose if I'd my druthers.

The rip-off dinner worth each cent 
With characters there hugging,
The pictures proof with smiles so wide
My heart-strings got a tugging.

To share this day with those I hold
Most dear cross generations
Was worth much more than I foresaw 
Despite my trepidations.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:55 PM
I feel like I was in those lines with you, your 2 and 4 year old grands, and your 89 year old aunt. Like this one a bunch!
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:27 AM
Lovely verse ilene, and your so right, a day out with the family cannot be beaten, even better that it was Disney. Tom.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:56 PM
thanks for the comment, tom! i'm not a very big disney fan but my son and his wife were taking the grandkids and it was wonderful seeing the delight in their eyes...
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