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My Destiny - a Traditional Cinquain

. Daughter My miracle Separated at birth I was lost until you found me Charlee ~~~~~~ Written: May 14, 2011 Dedicated to my beautiful, precious daughter

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James Fraser

Date: 8/2/2011 4:29:00 PM

Beautiful write to your daughter, it's so lovely. Thank you kindly for reading me Elaine :)

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/25/2011 10:32:00 PM

Beautiful. Just brings goosebumps when I read this one! Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2011 10:35:00 PM

I had to see this one because it is the same title that I used in my entry for the river contest (an oldie of mine) anyway, this is so beautiful, and I seem to remember you telling me about our daughter in the past. LOVE it.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/6/2011 8:12:00 AM

A wonderful tribute. It's hard to believe you could sum up such powerful emotions in just a few words, but you did and it's lovely. thank you for sharing this with us.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 2:29:00 PM

A lovely dedication and perfect lines to express the luv u have for your precious daughter Lainie.. not only are your poetic words so magnificent my friend but your words of comment are both wise and so very welcome ... they have lifted my spirits soaring to new heights as my intention was ...is .. and shall ever be.. to be a light on PS. and in the World of darkness... thankxx for being a great and special friend always luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2011 9:08:00 PM

How wonderful for your daughter. And what a cute name she has, Lainie!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2011 3:12:00 PM

Very touching and loving work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I can't imagine the pain a mother would feel being separated from their child when they are young...Very gracious and loving write...Thanks for the comments on my blog..Our Rocky was 14 1/2 years old..He had an enlarged heart and heart failure...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/16/2011 1:25:00 PM

So touching, Lainie. Did this really happen? We often hear of children finding their mothers later in life -- it rings of truth. Wonderful triute to Charlee! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/15/2011 5:20:00 AM

What a fine dedication to a daughter by a mother, Elaine